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Another Lonely Valentine / Written By Andrew Shields


Itís Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
Wishing That You Were Still Mine

Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
Well I Gave You My Heart
And You Tore It In Two

Sure , It Still Hurts And I Still Feel The Same
Seems My Heartís Driving Me Insane

Itís Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
Wishing That You Were Still Mine
Itís Another Lonely Valentine Ö For Me

So Sugar Is Sweet
And So Are You
But When You Broke My Heart
Whatíd You Expect Me To Do

Survive Though The Pain And Forget The Suffering
Hell , Because Of You Iím Still Recovering

Itís Just A Lonely Valentine
A F***d Up Lonely Valentine
Wishing That You Were Never Mine
Another Lonely Valentine Ö For Me

For All I Know Your Love Was Lies
So Now I Start To Realise

Iím A Sucker For Guilt
And I Canít Deal With Pain
So Iím Done With This S**t
Iím Done Playing This Love Game

Itís Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
Wishing You Were Never Mine
Itís Another Lonely Valentine Ö For Me

Itís Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
A Lonely Ö F***ed Up Ö Messed Up
Stupid Valentine Ö Iím Over You

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Hey Andy,

How goes you. Like this one, especially the second verse (maybe the first so could be removed and have What ya expect ....etc gets the 'do' out of the way. Sound defiant and sarcastic in the verses to me, but you do have a good turn of phrase.

Maybe the over all comment would be to tighten things up with the words, take out what is not necessary, or something..... wink

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Andy, my dear,

You are sooo young to have these heart broken feelings, but man, can you write a song...so good to see you on here and sharing your songs with us...I feel blessed having you here and I love reading all your songs....glyn

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thanks alan , believe it or not i wrote that when i woke up in the midle of the night and was bored , its a first draft
so im defo gonna tighten the lyrics up


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OMG thanks alot glyn thats actually so nice of you to say something like that xD love


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[quote=Andy-S-1407]Another Lonely Valentine / Written By Andrew Shields



Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue
I Gave You My Heart
You Ripped It In Two

And [naughty word removed] , It Still Hurts , But I Still Feel The Same
Even Though I Think Itís Pretty Much Insane

It's Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
Wishing You Were Still Mine
I'll think up a Lonely Valentine For Me

Sugar Is Sweet
And So Are You
When You Break A Heart
It's just can't be you

Ill Survive The Pain And Suffering
But Because Of You Iím Still Recovering

It's Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
Wishing You Were Still Mine
I'll think up a Lonely Valentine For Me

For All I Know Your Love Was Lies
So Now I Start To Realise

Iím filled with Guilt
Canít Deal With Pain
Iím Done With This [naughty word removed]
Done Playing your Game

It's Just A Lonely Valentine
Another Lonely Valentine
Wishing You Were Still Mine
I'll think up a Lonely Valentine For Me


---Just a few guick suggs, KOS. Follow your logic through the song. Never take your eyes off of what you are trying to get across to others who have not gone through your experience -- YET. Make 'em live it too. smile

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thanks dave


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This one reminds me very much of the interviews I saw on TV with Jenny Sanford, the betrayed wife of South Carolina's governor, who now has put out a book. I bet this is what she's felling this season. Structure seems very good. I don't really have a Valentines date this year, but I'm not complaining. As I have been out of work for most of the time since late last March, I guess I have to think about the money I'm saving. But will make up for it a week from tomorrow.

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Like that much better, Andy! Rock on! smile

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cool man , thanks


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Great still some meter and rhyme but you can tightin' up this one but you spell alot better than I do.

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honestly what the heck does meter mean ? , rhythem , well that depends on the music , which , is pretty much sorted , and usually the "tightening" up of songs (streamlining) is taking out words , that usually leaves somethings senseless or pointless , so yeh ive done all of that , ill accept suggestions and stuff but ive already done that its pointless to do it again


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Howdy Andy, This is not nearly as good as "Scream", too many
overused cliches. the phrasing, content, etc fall short of your abilities, & the meter is not good........Gus


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gus i suppose your right about the falling short of my abbilities
but this is a first draft in all honesty
i know ill improve on this , im plan on leaving it aside for a bit then coming back with a fresh veiw on it , im confused with the over used clighes thing tho


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Originally Posted by Steven August Rieck
Howdy Andy, This is not nearly as good as "Scream", too many
overused cliches. the phrasing, content, etc fall short of your abilities, & the meter is not good........Gus


Over used cliches?
I don't get it... i'd say the song is perfect as it is tbh :O
But then again i'm no expert


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thanks dean


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Re-write / second draft


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I mean the Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Little brother.
there must be a better way to get to there, Huh?
the 2nd draft is better in some ways, but still weak on meter,
which I can't explain without showing you.......Gus


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dude , to save me taking a mental breakdown and flipping , just explain what the hell meter is , its begining to annoy me , i need to understand something if im gonna fix it , you get me?


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I don't critic much any more because I suck at it but so you don't flip out here is the best example I can give you of METER
Good luck with the rewrite on this one.


Cliches
Commonly used phrases that have been used to death in previous songs. Creative writers try to avoid them and find a new and different way to say the same thing. However it is sometimes good to apply a cliche with a twist on its meaning.

Meter. Depending on Genre of course.
Some like to count syllables but that really isn't it.
Look at the structure of the song. Separate the verses out. Now say each line of the first verse and tap your foot on the syllables that are accented and flow with the tapping.
Now see if you get the same "meter" in the next verse. If you don't your meter is off and it will be difficult to sing.
That's the best I can explain it.
Then do the same with the chorus

Here is an example of METER in Mary had a little lamb. just the first line of each verse is shown.

V1
Tap---Tap---tap-----tap
Mar-y Had A Lit-tle lamb.

V2
----tap--------tap----tap---------tap
He foll-owed her to school one day

V3
-----tap----Tap------tap----------tap
And so the tea-cher turned him out


V4
-------tap--------tap--------tap---tap
What makes the lamb love Mar-y so

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thanks alot bill , you have no idea how much that helps smile


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You are welcome andy
The taps didn't line up very well on the post, lol
I tried to fix it don't know if it did or not but I think you get the idea.


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yeh i did


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howdy andy, Bill did something I couldn't, explain meter. Thanks for the Helping Hand, Bill........Gus


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A slightly more revised version , ill re-write it again later tonight , but fornow im away with my mates to write some guitar


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Glad to help Gus
Andy was sounding a little frightful there smile

However that was a pretty simple answer I gave. It's the best I could do.
Here's a link that gets into it further
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Howdy Andy, Here is a little something to give you some Ideas
on how to eliminate, those terrible cliche's at the beginning.
Hope this helps...............KOS

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dude , the cliches are staying , sorry , i know you've said they've been done way to many times , i agree , but this is something i wanna do , theres always gonna be an idea , and theres always gonna be people to do it differently , tahts what i intend to do , i hope i can make those lines work , if i cant then i owe you an appology and you can tell me "i told you so" , but thanks alot anyway man i really appreciate it


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MORE POWER TO YOU, BRUDDA, ROLL ON...........Gus


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Roses Are Red
Violets Are Blue

Sugar is sweet
So are you

Often a twist on a cliche can work wonders in a song. It brings the familiarity of the cliche but gives it a fresh look

The Roses were red
The Violets were blue
'Til I gave you my heart
and you tore in in two

Sugar's not Sweet
now I don't have you
you turned my heart bitter
Whatíd You Expect Me To Do

Just a thought.


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