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Scott, this is good !!! Well played and performed I really enjoyed the listening  Keep up the good work. All the best Jan
"You have to react to what's around you in the moment, whatever the music is.
Just think of it as some place you have to enter and you need to find the key."
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Great idea Scott... digging a hole to bury his gold in...
To come back for later hehe
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Scott, this is good !!! Well played and performed I really enjoyed the listening Keep up the good work. All the best Jan Thanks Jan - appreciate the listen and the comment. Scott
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To come back for later hehe
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And if he doesn't, someone else is going to have to work for it  Thanks Roy Scott
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"Folk the only genre might be where something like that get away with you might."  I thought the Yoda speech made it sound more old timey because it lays right into the lyrics. It doesn't come across as a device just to get a rhyme. Anyway, have at the gold/heart thing if you really want to. Seems like I have more metaphors hanging around than I have pockets to keep them in, and nothing's really suggesting itself to me about how to write that one.
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"Folk the only genre might be where something like that get away with you might." I thought the Yoda speech made it sound more old timey because it lays right into the lyrics. It doesn't come across as a device just to get a rhyme. Anyway, have at the gold/heart thing if you really want to. Seems like I have more metaphors hanging around than I have pockets to keep them in, and nothing's really suggesting itself to me about how to write that one. It is true that the rhyme works the way I have it. Funny thing is though that if I sing "Until I ran out of steam" even anticipating in my head that the next line will rhyme with "steam", I don't like it as much Yeah, being familiar with the work you've posted here, I don't doubt you have a few metaphors lying around. Thanks, Scott
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