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#538368 - 09/03/07 09:23 PM Just Like My Love For You  
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Dave Woods Offline
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Here's something I wrote earlier this year...lyrics only...

Just Like My Love For You

Some things in life need no explanation
We just accept them as the truth
The sun's gonna rise, stars gonna shine
Just like my love for you

As endless as time, as new as the dawn
As real as the sky is blue
Flowers will grow, the rivers will flow
Just like my love for you

Chorus

Stronger with each passing day
How can something so good get better
So many things come and go
But now and then some last forever
Just like my love for you

There's a design way beyond our power
We can't control it, can't dispute
The moon hangs above held by God's touch
Just like my love for you

I knew from the start, I'll know till the end
My heart couldn't be more true
Singers will sing of wonderous things
Just like my love for you

Chorus

Stronger with each passing day
How can something so good get better
So many things come and go
But now and then some last forever
Just like my love for you


Lyrics by Dave Woods Copyright (c) 2007




#538451 - 09/04/07 08:16 AM Re: Just Like My Love For You [Re: Dave Woods]  
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Hey Dave,

Yeah... I like this lyric. It's tender and uncomplicated. Though it does present itself as a freshly cut bouquet of love cliches.(Say that one time fast) Still, it won me over. Sure it has a borrowed heart but it's got a soul all it's own. Which means you're gonna need a great melody to keep it alive.
Grammar nits: sure.
Am I overwhelmed by the repetitive hook: Maybe? Music will make or break the monotony.

Any further compliments require proof.

all the best,
Dog

P.S. ... who you talking with? On the phone, in the picture?


edit: I think I was a bit tooo playful the day I wrote this... So I struck-out the unimportant parts.

Last edited by PogoDog; 09/08/07 09:41 AM.
#538476 - 09/04/07 10:45 AM Re: Just Like My Love For You [Re: PogoDog]  
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HI Dave,
Don't know if I've read anything of your before. Anyway, welcome to he board. Love songs are tough but looks like you've done pretty well. An unrhymed last line in a C always bugs me. Could be jusr me. That's in spite of it being afte every V too. Personally, I like to see it rhymed in the C. Then I could "hear
It after every V. This is just an idea but welcome if you want it
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Chorus

Stronger with each passing day
How can something so good get better
So many things come and go
But now and then some last forever
FOREVER AND STILL BRAND NEW
Just like my love for you


#539210 - 09/06/07 08:17 AM Re: Just Like My Love For You [Re: Wyman Lloyd]  
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Hey Wyman like your suggestion so much it made me think of my own lol. Just an idea might not work

Chorus

Stronger with each passing day
How can something so good get better
So many things come and go
But now and then some last forever
FOREVER "is" STILL BRAND NEW
Just like my love for you


All the worlds a song and all the people Singers

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#539539 - 09/07/07 12:45 PM Re: Just Like My Love For You [Re: Derek Hines]  
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Works for me Dave
Wy

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