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Florida
by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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I like the energy in this song. The chorus changes really separate it from the verses - I like the speed up of the words. Very nice overall. Are you playing all the instruments?
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Wow, you're good!
Really good songwriting. Good melody the song builds really well and the chorus is a very nice payoff. Couldn't wait to get back to it. That is a very good sign.
How about that the guitars are keyboards. I can usually tell but I think the mix is so dense that I couldn't. Maybe I can on the last verse.
Third listen. . . enjoying it more each time.
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I enjoyed listening to this. I like the chorus the best. Don't think you need that pre-chorus at all. Good luck to you.
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I think the guitar tone is most realistic on this song by far.
My experience is even real guitars are a bear to record. Especially Acoustic or distorted. The sound your ears hear is hard to get on tape. For me anyway.
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Musica.....This is not my favorite one by you...but it's good...I'm talking about listening wise....just me.....t-bob
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Can't believe that's not real guitar....
I think I've told you this before but the songs of yours that appeal to me most are those that have just a touch of retro feel to them but still manage to sound current.
This one falls into that category for me....
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Hi
Hey great job! What a fun tune... nice guitar sample that is really incredible and how you got everything to flow & fit.
The lyrics are just getting better and better all the time.
This was very catchy I liked it... no real nits it's very cool and different from your others. You are doing great work and the sounds are good
It is so hard working on all of it right? But everything all the areas are sounding good Michael.
Soon I'm gonna find a tune here for you to sing I have always liked your voice alot!
peace
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Howdy! Liked it a bunch! Kudos!  Chuck Crowe
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Hey, ya pinched my "knight in shining armor" line.  (Not exactly, no worries! just noticed it sounded familiar when it popped in there!) It stays interesting all the way through. I like the sound and feel here. Nice work on the sampling. Good to hear that it gets easier with practice! Reminds me of Ducky in Pretty in Pink. Poor Ducky Linda
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Hi Musica,
HOW how how did you get that guitar to sound real? I've tried...unsuccessfully...to get MIDI guitars to sound real...what patches did you use? What program?
The tune is really catchy...I find myself bouncing to the tune...it sounds like music you'd hear while sitting at a bar in a metropolitan area...LOL
The only thing I can suggest is clearing up the vocals, they seem a bit muddy...besides that, it's great!
-Karen
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