12 members (Fdemetrio, Bill Draper, Gary E. Andrews, Guy E. Trepanier, JAPOV, couchgrouch, ckiphen, Gavin Sinclair, 2 invisible),
1,222
guests, and
761
robots. |
Key:
Admin,
Global Mod,
Mod
|
|
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.
By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690 |
Cock A Doodle Doo
poor man decides to wheel his barbecue grill into the local supermarket, cause they got pork chops center cut, prime burgers, and filet mignon, all the best condiments, baby back ribs baby back ribs baby back ribs tender loins for this starving boy chicken legs chicken thighs, chicken breasts, wooooohooooo
cock a doodle doo
they even got beef for beef stew, they got fish, yeah bbq shrimp in garlic sauce, what's that officer, what's that you say, you want a double cheeseburger to go with your double wide, ain't a country song without a double wide, and some bbqued French fries, a little pickle onions relish, hey why not embellish this here bbq is Texas sized, sure tastes good, wooooo feels good too, everybody satisfied, woooohooooo
cock a doodle doo
eating eating eating and swigging beer, that's right they got beer, twelve ounce, big mouths, dark and light, by the six pack, or by the case, gonna party till we empty this place, and everybody has a smiley face. So if your wondering round, feeling down, looking crubby like a bum, don't know where your next meal is coming from, roll your bbq grill into the local super market, just spritz the fluid and light her, have yourself some yum yum fun, wooooohooooo
cock a doodle doo
© 2005 by ritt
[This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 02-03-2005).]
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jul 2004
Posts: 822
Serious Contributor
|
Serious Contributor
Joined: Jul 2004
Posts: 822 |
As a vegetarian I struggled to get past the first few lines of this!
But I guess if I was a starving boy looking crubby like a bum - well the message is loud and clear anyhow - clever and visual ritt!
Diane
Mz Bernie Taupin looking for her Elton John??
|
|
|
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690 |
Thanks Diane
first verse is a lil step right up, thievery, but if you don't tell Tom, I'll be forever grateful!
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jul 2004
Posts: 822
Serious Contributor
|
Serious Contributor
Joined: Jul 2004
Posts: 822 |
Yes - I can see it - or rather hear it now! sshh - perhaps no-one will notice!
Mz Bernie Taupin looking for her Elton John??
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2001
Posts: 4,430
Top 100 Poster
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jan 2001
Posts: 4,430 |
LOL! This is cute and flows pretty well. Even without your name on it, I'd still know you wrote it. You're one of the few posters on here with a recognizable style, and that counts for a lot. Anthony
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,857 Likes: 1
Top 10 Poster
|
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,857 Likes: 1 |
I agree, with Anthony, I would have known who wrote this one too ! ha...........should be an interesting day at the store today. I'll be on the lookout for you, 2 wheelin' down the meat case ! Fun song, but you forgot the chicken feet. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewartmusic.htm
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2003
Posts: 1,402
Top 100 Poster
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jan 2003
Posts: 1,402 |
Hiya SJ,
It's a little weird.
Cock a doodle doo??? Where did THAT come from? An expression commonly used in the Bronx? Could use a little help on that, maybe translate it for this southern boy. ;-)
The set-up image of a poor man wheeling his grill into a supermarket and helping himself just doesn't "sell-well" to me. Sorry for the nits, I just don't think this is one of your finer efforts.
Cheers,
Stan
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 29,275
Top 10 Poster
|
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 29,275 |
G'Mornin' Rittster!
Took me 2 reads to get "into" this'n'..
First One I wasn't too Thrilled...but Second Pass-thru it was a LOT of FUN.
IF you got a KILLER Melody to go with this'n, you got a Carry-Out HIT.
"KUDOS" & Good Luck with a Memorable One, Amigo.
DO try harder on "You'RE" vs "Your"...and "Grubby" is da word, not "crubby" last time I heard English Spoken.
Big Guy-Hug, Ol' Stan
|
|
|
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690 |
Thanks Anthony
bought a new mic, me my bro and Joyce are gonna wail this sucker at halftime, be sure to tune into FOX!!!!
|
|
|
|
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Aug 2003
Posts: 10,690 |
Thanks Calvin
now we want only prime filets, no butt cuts ya hear...
|
|
|
We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.
|
|
Forums117
Topics125,752
Posts1,161,269
Members21,470
|
Most Online37,523 Jan 25th, 2020
|
|
"When will we all, as artists, creators and facilitators learn that the so-called experts in our lives are nothing more than someone who has stepped forward and called themselves an expert?" –Brian Austin Whitney
|
|
|
|