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I guess today udio not letting me download no big deal it's the the fuckin stupid titles they give it.

This is kinda "shoe gazing" rock...

Places Not Yet Found

htthttps://www.udio.com/songs/24pXbLqYd7xXKASFVs2n7D

Places Not Yet Found

Was about time
for the sunshine
took the B line
saw a free sign

Found me a great little book
went to cool off by the brooke
and the air was ever so clean
play Tom Petty and the mind just starts to
dream...dream...dream
, .
Then I, I saw a friend who
Said "I knew you"
flipped his sun roof
"see ya later, dude"

I gotta get somethin goin
get me a life worth showin, cause
There ain't a thing here
I used to have it, yeah everybody knew my name...
Name, what's my name?

And the world keeps on twirlin' round
Ain't it great familiar place in your hometown
Spirits cheer but I hear no sound
Put my faith in places not yet found

It's the right time
You're the right kind
In the skyline
See your name n mine

You're still a beauty girl
light up the moody world
and I'll be waiting for you
I see you thinkin but me I got nothin to lose
Or choose...refuse

And the world keeps on twirlin' round
Ain't it great familiar place in your hometown
Spirits cheer but I hear no sound
Put my faith in places not yet found

New version

https://www.udio.com/songs/24pXbLqYd7xXKASFVs2n7D

Vocals need to be bumped up . looks good Dom

Lol you made me laugh Ben..m

Shoegazing is a subgenre of alternative rock characterized by ethereal soundscapes, obscured vocals, and the heavy use of distortion and effects pedals to create a dense, layered "wall of sound".The name comes from the way musicians would often stare down at their effects pedals during live performances, reflecting the genre's introspective and non-showmanlike nature. Key bands include My Bloody Valentine, Slowdive, and Ride.

I guess I can't understand a word he says. You really got to concentrate to make out words

Lol I know, but it's the style I was going for. Could bump up vocals if doing it myself

This work better Ben? I think it's really cool

Before I spend hours fine tuning it

https://www.udio.com/songs/u258GD9ugCiEdptt4etKZj

Dom,
don't you listen to your stuff before you post? Listen to how this is pronounced:

dream dream, dteam

One weakness of this is it will mis pronounce words, I deal with it cause I'm gonna sing my best stuff myself, at some point

Yeah it's better . Yeah sing it yourself , You'll love studios

Yeah diction of robots miss words wrong , they also slow and speed down tracks

I've heard it say words so far off you don't know what happened. But it's too late cause the melody is formed already

This bot sounds to me like a Eddie Vedder clone

Are you guys blaming the robots for some kind of mispronunciation? The songwriter misspelled a word and the robots did exactly what they were told to do. The writer made the mistake, not the robots.

Rob did you read what I said?

There was no typo

Dom,
of course I read what you said: "One weakness of this is it will mis pronounce words." Your robots mispronounced a word. I pointed you to the word. There's a typo. Now you claim there is no typo. Believe me Dom, there is. Your robots are singing "dteam" because that's the way you wrote it. Not here. JPF didn't generate your song. You mispelled the word in Udio. If you want the pronunciation fixed, fix the spelling. Or better yet, sing it yourself. That would solve the whole issue at the source.

I don't use the word robots Ben does.

It's happened a gazillion times , it doesn't say the word you want it to, and sometimes it makes up ts own words, even if not using auto.

For the price I ain't complaining.

And this take can not be sold, if it can I wouldnt be selling it

It's a interesting song with a pretty good demo of it

Not sure where you arrogance is coming from

Dom,
go here: https://www.udio.com/songs/24pXbLqYd7xXKASFVs2n7D
Look at how you spelled "dream".

dream dream, dteam <--- the third "dream" is misspelled!

Exactly that is what Udio sings. I'm trying to help you. You call me arrogant. How should Udio sing that line correctly if you misspell it? Ok, you know everything better. Have a great evening....

Ok well if that was the cause, I apologize. I dint see it when I look at my track.

But I can assure you it sings it's own words sometimes I'll give you an example.

It's happened even spelled right.

Your arrogance comes from ignoring the song and mentioning that as if the song is an after thought.

You havent written songs like this

Dom,
I tried to help you. I posted here 4 times and you say I ignored the song. You ignored what I wrote! Instead of saying thank you I get a "you haven't written songs like this" from you. Yes, Dom, so true. I can't recall ever having written songs like this.

If you had said.. great song let me point this out. I think a thank you would come

I mean John tells you you are Paul Simon

It's more than words it's an inner life., that's really the only separation I have

Dom,
the song is not my cup of tea. Your style is different than what I write and what I normally listen to. That doesn't mean it's bad. Nevertheless I tried to help you.

Are you jealous or what is the issue you are addressing? Are you blaming me that someone likes one of my songs?

Lol, there's no need to be jealous, your lyrics have no depth, are written like a plumber writes.

No, it's not jealousy, it's part of a bigger problem, critiquing the person, not the song.

Non of your songs are not connected kg from any particular fire. They are just words that rhyme.

Work on it, say something from the inside. Stop relying on conversations here to fuel interest, and, don't treat my songs like your stuff is superior.

That's laughable

I'm surprised John said anything at all he hates robots songs , cuz its stealing his livelihood

Not that John... Lol

John the accountant

https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1210446/re-dillon-mae.html#Post1210446

Dom, this thread is about your song. I helped you . Remember?

and you did a nice job of trying to deflect it.

You'll never write a chorus like that

And Guys song was beautiful. I don't get by by being stupid

Dom,
don't expect me to ever help you again. Have a nice evening.

Well a accountant would its a penny a track, A mp3 track with the artist singing is the dinosaur of 2025 on forums

Can live with this version, few Getty ups but I especially like the way the instrumental section picked up on the emotion displayed in the lyrics, kinda takes you to a different place.

Definitely something I can Domize later

https://www.udio.com/songs/1Zz4L6JkiP1F6GdNEcjKnh

Song and lyric not bad at all Dom...no idea about the bands you say are like this but this one definitely has a good things going for it in music, melody, beat\groove artistic grungy feel...

John, I think I'm a better judge if its not bad.

I think the chorus is as good as anything posted here, a bit esoteric or poetic maybe, and not hit radio, which I can write too. But not anybody is writing that.

Your veiled attempt to defend your boyfriend, is honorable, but I don't buy your half praise.

Write something better than this, I'll admit it if it is

Dom my profoundest apologies for not waxing poetically about your AI generated work to the high heavens where it so obviously belongs.

Having been left so clearly short of praise, I asked AI to draft it for you

O radiant flame of harmony,
You rise beyond the reach of words,
A river of light through shadowed hearts,
The breath of heaven clothed in sound.

You bind the broken, lift the weary,
You crown the silence with eternity.
In your song, the cosmos dances,
And all creation finds its voice.


don't like your thin skin in all of this Dom and your insult back.

I was\am sincere in what I said about your song.

John, the only reason you came in this thread was cause you saw your newest pal getting schooled.

You strategically aom your words so that they try to straddle some fence.

What kind of response is "not bad at all"

I read one post where you tell Rob b that he is an artist... An artist at what? Bullshit?

You have a history of coming after me when it somebody you're currently in love with.

Not sure why you think es a good writer who is going to help you?

Not bad at all coming from Pete townshend, , I'd be thrilled, coming from you not so much.

Rob b is a bad writer

Mmmmmm

1) this is not great but not bad....as I said some good things going for it. Don't like that answer? Too bad.

2) I said Rob was the artist and essentially had the last word on what HIS lyric was about. Don't put motives or words in my mouth

3) Sorry, Pete is too busy to tell you how absolutely fantastic you are. I hoper you football picks today soothe your fragile ego

Dom,

You write lyrics like you're panning for gold in a stream of pigshit.

Tony

Im better than Rob b, if you wanna think otherwise go head, just stop using my posts to show him you love him.

The fact that you kiss his ass shows your opinion means nothing.

You seem to not be involved here, yet you read everything and only talk when it's advantageous to you.

I don't need your reviews, go away.

Write a song in the next ten years

And how do you do it?

I actually take that as a compliment.

I write cause I wanna share some insight, panning for gold in pig [naughty word removed] works. Finding every day heroism in the mundane.

Revealing alot without being precise, trying to create living characters

I actually appreciate your comment, ty

Ha, Lol!
I was just trying to provide some perspective... and, perhaps, some comic relief.
Yes, in case you couldn't tell, that was most definitely an insult

I actually take that as a compliment.

I write cause I wanna share some insight, panning for gold in pig [naughty word removed] works. Finding every day heroism in the mundane.

Revealing alot without being precise, trying to create living characters

I actually appreciate your comment, ty

Dom,
I’m not sure why you’re bringing my name into this thread. This discussion is about your song. As Marty often says: don’t bring me up!



John didn’t make any comparison — you did. Once again, don’t bring me up! Leave me out of your threads. Focus on your song, and stop bringing me into the conversation.

I know how John operates. I assume he's kissing your ass cause he wants your help in doing ai songs.

He hasn't commented on any song, written or shared a song here in years. He didn't come here benevolently or by accident

At any rate? What are you gonna do about it Rob?

I'll bring up stupidity in order to get rid of it.

Guess I'm living rent free in your head Dom....you seem to think you know me so well.

For the record...you and others may like playing with AI to craft your songs...I do not and will unlikely do so.
Not into punching some keys to get software to write a lyric and compose a song...and say look ma, no hands, no sweat, I'm a rock star
I love the process, my gift of rhyme, to be able to hear music in my head, to turn my thoughts into a finished song.
To hear something that starts out sounding simply awful but grows into a song people like and ask for.

Having said that, AI is a tool and I do like some of the product....like the one Bob wrote that you told me was simple bootlicking...I suppose because I was more neutral with yours
Put them side by side...you will hear and see I am right

As for not commenting or not posting...or only posting on Rob's song....he is fresh air at a place that had turned into Tony & Marty slugfest which both sides see as simple entertainment with you coming in with side snipes.

I certainly lurked and read some of the errr creative goings on...but was not participating. Likely has to do with me respecting Brian's place here...he's tried to turn things, to mediate things, to guide things...but to no avail. Staying out of things was to me doing Brian a favour.

But I see that this is entirely hopeless as nothing can be posted here anymore without the trio of usual suspects coming in to roil things around.

John,

https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1210615/re-the-ward.html#Post1210615

John,

https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1210615/re-the-ward.html#Post1210615

John,

https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1210615/re-the-ward.html#Post1210615

John,

https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1210615/re-the-ward.html#Post1210615