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I’ve been writing songs since decades and my biggest problem is the limitation I have when it comes to playing instruments, singing and producing my songs. I hear all these songs in my head but I just can’t record them the way I hear them. Now, with these new AI-based capabilities I have an AI band that plays the instruments exactly the way I hear them, a vocalist who sings just like I did originally, just much better. Here is an exact cover version of a song I wrote together with Carroll Kiphen 6 years ago called “Perhaps I’ll Never Know”.

PERHAPS I’LL NEVER KNOW
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Verse
I’ve spent my whole life waiting
Anticipating love
I’ve tried being patient
But enough’s enough

Pre-chorus
Ooh
Ooh
Ooh-oo-oo

Chorus
There’s no red light, no green light
To tell me stop or go
If there’s a right time, a wrong time
Perhaps I’ll never know
Perhaps I’ll never know
Perhaps I’ll never know
Perhaps I’ll never know

Verse
I have to seize the moment
Who knows I might succeed
Might end up broken hearted
Might find another me

Pre-chorus
Ooh
Ooh
Ooh

Chorus
There’s no red light, no green light
To tell me stop or go
If there’s a right time, a wrong time
Perhaps I’ll never know

Bridge
A hand to hold my hand
Sweet lips to kiss my lips
Might catch a falling star
Fulfill a foolish wish

Chorus
There’s no red light, no green light
To tell me stop or go
If there’s a right time, a wrong time
Perhaps I’ll never know

Chorus
There’s no red light, no green light
To tell me stop or go (stop or go)
If there’s a right time, a wrong time
Perhaps I’ll never know
Perhaps I’ll never know
Perhaps I’ll never know
Perhaps I’ll never know

Lovely song and lyric, Enjoyable to listen to. Only one thing I would change if it were mine and that is in the chorus repeating "Perhaps I’ll never know" because I think once or twice is enough.

That's what I'll say, other than that I like it.

Irwin