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Tom Goss
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/12/25 08:48 AM
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Hyber
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/11/25 11:18 PM
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MARBLE
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/11/25 10:54 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 06/11/25 10:43 PM
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Let me start thinking how I will make this into a good song. No copyright on a title.
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Let me start thinking how I will make this into a good song. No copyright on a title. Dropping onto my songs and trolling and demeaning my writing again? Nonetheless, I'm curious to see what you can do. They say "write what you know." In a previous post, I recall you stating that you had only been involved in 2 romances in your entire life. If so, that is not going to be a very big data base, or difficult to understand. Nonetheless, show us what you got.
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Let me start thinking how I will make this into a good song. No copyright on a title. Dropping onto my songs and trolling and demeaning my writing again? Nonetheless, I'm curious to see what you can do. They say "write what you know." In a previous post, I recall you stating that you had only been involved in 2 romances in your entire life. If so, that is not going to be a very big data base, or difficult to understand. Nonetheless, show us what you got. No I've been in dozens of romances, I've only been in love once or twice . Yes write what you know, as long as you can write like you are really in there, it works Having the real experience helps. I don't think this is a about love anyway, it's about heartbreak. But it's still gotta be artistic or poetic, not written boring. Somebody has to hear it, give them a reason to listen on. Good opening lines, help the listener see what's going on, as opposed to just saying it. Reward the listener with a good hook, and in country a payoff
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You are correct about titles.
So write it. I'm curious to see what actually gets on the page.
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I found the original lyric to this, it's not bad so I won't mess with it.
It's just...that just another errand is not a good title or hook. There are other ways to say the same thing
It's better than GONa take a pass
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