|
11 members (Kay-lynn Carew, Bill Draper, David Gill, Irwin, Michael W. Brown, bennash, Everett Adams, 4 invisible),
25,433
guests, and
5,161
robots. |
|
Key:
Admin,
Global Mod,
Mod
|
|
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.
By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
JDBAC
by JAPOV - 01/16/26 09:42 AM
|
WHEN?
by JAPOV - 01/16/26 09:32 AM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Joan Baez
by Gary E. Andrews - 01/15/26 09:57 AM
|
|
|
|
|
Star Trek
by John Lawrence Schick - 01/14/26 03:55 PM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
https://www.soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14928224Vocal production Murph Addison Lyric/ Music Vaughan & Addison Chorus The beer talks the whisky sings ev'rytime I mix those things It'll be another crazy flight Out with the boys on a Friday night Verse Bars crowded the bands playing I might get lucky, just saying Already one guys introduced himself not one to be left on the shelf Chorus The beer talks the whisky sings ev'rytime I mix the darn things It'll be another crazy flight Out with the boys on a Friday night Bridge smiled at a gal her eyebrows raised so I danced on as she looked away Joined in the singing bit outof tune Hey its' Friday night, if you don't it's rude Chorus The beer talks the whisky sings ev'rytime I mix thOSE THINGS things It'll be another crazy flight Out with the boys on a Friday night Instrumental Verse Couple of the guys dancing away met two gals, so don't think they'll stay Dancing with bottles in our hands don't like fun? Then you won't understand Chorus The beer talks the whisky sings ev'rytime I mix those things It'll be another crazy flight Out with the boys on a Friday night Oh yeah! out with the boys on a Saturday night
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Aug 2007
Posts: 6,896 Likes: 86
Top 40 Poster
|
|
Top 40 Poster
Joined: Aug 2007
Posts: 6,896 Likes: 86 |
I think this is really good. You got some twang John.
You turned some nice phrases and the light-heartedness and fun-loving gist of the song seems aligned with what I hear on country radio.
Vocalist sounds good too.
Good song.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,119 Likes: 78
Top 25 Poster
|
|
Top 25 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,119 Likes: 78 |
I think this is really good. You got some twang John.
You turned some nice phrases and the light-heartedness and fun-loving gist of the song seems aligned with what I hear on country radio.
Vocalist sounds good too.
Good song. Marty, you dint know how to write, I could care a less what your obviously biased views are. You have zero imagination, "to you my life means nothing, to me it means a lot.. lollllllllll My goodness pure cinema scope. And everybody knows I'm a better writer, musician and singer than you are, and you know it, and I know it. So who are you fooling? You have no sense of the spirit of s critique, you will try, and fail as everything you do does. You lose all credibility acting the way you do. Nobody believes positive or negative reviews from you, one you dint know what's good, two, you only want praise for yourself in the end. Proven liars are not good reviewers
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 05/16/25 01:24 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Aug 2007
Posts: 6,896 Likes: 86
Top 40 Poster
|
|
Top 40 Poster
Joined: Aug 2007
Posts: 6,896 Likes: 86 |
You lose all credibility acting the way you do. Really? Fascinating.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
Cheers Marty thanks for your comments and listen.
Groan, troll alert.
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 3,874 Likes: 125
Top 100 Poster
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 3,874 Likes: 125 |
Hey John
Good bar song that ticks all the boxes
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 6,797 Likes: 164
Top 40 Poster
|
|
Top 40 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 6,797 Likes: 164 |
I'd like to hear this with a more "updated" country/rock feel 
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
Hi bennash
Thanks for your comments we're glad it worked for you
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
Hi JAPOV
I stopped listening to a lot of modern country music it didn't appeal anymore.
This is about as modern I get giving country rap etc a wide berth.
Thanks for the listen and your feedback
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 4,029 Likes: 28
Top 100 Poster
|
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 4,029 Likes: 28 |
Soundclick wouldn't open for me.
steady-eddie
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 6,797 Likes: 164
Top 40 Poster
|
|
Top 40 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 6,797 Likes: 164 |
This is about as modern I get giving country rap etc a wide berth.
John ...Lol 
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 4,029 Likes: 28
Top 100 Poster
|
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 4,029 Likes: 28 |
Still not getting it John.
The link took me too Bobby Rydell's "Wild Won" from 1960..............not really, but the link didn't open for me....hmm?
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
Honestly don't know what's happened Ed sorry about this there doesn't seem to be anyone else with this issue which is very odd. https://www.soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14928224Try again? John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 4,029 Likes: 28
Top 100 Poster
|
|
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 4,029 Likes: 28 |
Ok, it finally loaded for me. I really like the tune and the lyrics--fun modern country tune. I do think the Bridge could digress better musically however for better identity and change-up.
Best,
steadwardo
|
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8
Top 10 Poster
|
|
OP
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 12,380 Likes: 8 |
Lol
At last yes the bridge is a bit weak Ed I sometimes struggle with the bridge and of course it's importance is acknowledged in country songs
I write a lot of folk stuff and many times a bridge isn't necessary.
Thanks for your patience
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
|
|
|
|
We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.
|
|
|
Forums118
Topics128,297
Posts1,181,119
Members21,478
| |
Most Online124,837
Dec 25th, 2025
|
|
|
"I have dreamed a lot of things that have come true for other people, because I didn't take the action to make them come true for me." –Brian Austin Whitney
|
|
|
|
