This was the first song I ever tried, it was goodish, but since I've been reinventing all of them, they keep getting better. It can't be ...presto click,everything better.

I think there is skill in the whole process. Especially if you can learn from and build on something you liked.

This should be a guy singing, I don't give a [naughty word removed], she kills it as a pop song. I will eventually end up singing all of these myself. That's coming

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In my dream she was there
a hard angel in blue
at a gala somewhere
she was passing on through

She attracted the light
like a magazine page
when the moment arrived
she walked up on a stage

And she fell down
Yeah, she fell down
I'd pick her up and kiss her
If she fell down

I wasn't sure what I'd seen
shook the cobwebs and strange
things don't happen like this
not to her unexplained

But she fell down
yeah, she fell down
I'd pick her up and kiss her
If she fell down

If we're here with a plan
she was put here for man
life comes easy to her
like the palm of your hand

Now, she's only a face
I don't know her too well
through this town I would chase
my only hope was she fell

And she fell down
yeah, she fell down
I'd pick her up and kiss her
If she fell down

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 04/22/25 06:50 AM.