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A Kiss
by Marilyn Oakley - 03/15/25 01:26 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/11/25 10:35 PM
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https://on.soundcloud.com/LemdKDjpjCKnWEmE9Blown away [verse] There’s thunder in the distance; A storm is on the way. The wind has begun to blow. Trees are starting to sway. I hear a locomotive. The suns’ taken refuge. I’m huddled in the cellar, till the train passes through. [pre chorus] The cellar doors tremble. They fight to survive. I fear some of my friends. may not be alive. [chorus] All the storm has left behind is misery and pain. All that i hold near and dear; forever blown away. [verse] Now there is only silence. A time to shed our tears. Our house, our car, our best friends. They are no longer here. The barn is in a cornfield. A dead cows’ in a tree. The consequence of this storm. will forever haunt me. [Pre chorus] I still have the nightmares; I hear the freight train. I see faces of friends. the storm stole away. [chorus] All the storm has left behind is misery and pain. All that I held near and dear; forever blown away. [bridge] Beneath the debris lay memories. Torn to pieces by the wind. A home and a life of innocence that I’ll never see again. [outro] Forever, forever forever blown away. Forever, forever forever blown away.
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I enjoyed the read and the music fits nicely!
(one nit: dead cow under a toppled tree)
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nope in a tree. highlights the power of a tornado
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Hey Carroll,
Goodness. I hope this isn't a true story for you or yours.
The lyrics are simple and easy. I like your choice of music style and vocal.
Peace,
Dave
"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"
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My favorite lines in the lyric are;
"A home and a life of innocence
that I’ll never see again".
Such a cool story of I would put it as a love song for I felt emotions listening. Nice story, Nice song.
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