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A Kiss
by Marilyn Oakley - 03/15/25 01:26 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/11/25 10:35 PM
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I Didn’t Hear You Come In ©2025 Robert George
I didn’t hear you come in For my thoughts were dark and deep As a castle keep My regrets made a lonely din And I didn’t hear you come in
I didn’t hear you come in My soul had become a shell Just an empty well Full of nothing but fear and sin So I didn’t hear you come in
We surround our hearts with fences Made of things that thrill our senses
I didn’t hear you come in Even though my eyes were closed My tears were exposed You knew where my sorrows had been But I didn’t hear you come in
Then you came to me Secretly, silently In the chamber of my prayer I could see you there In that moment my confusion melted I didn’t hear you come in…I felt it
I didn’t hear you come in…I felt it I felt it…
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Like it Couch
Teenie suggestion for your consideration
didn’t hear you come in My soul had become a shell Which is just as well the well image just want to "fill up"..but it is full of nothing Full of nothing but fear and sin
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Great lyric CG. A potential singer may have a spot of trouble singing 'come in' and bringing its intended 'arrival' meaning to the for.
Last edited by Bill Draper; 02/14/25 04:20 PM.
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