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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 02/05/25 07:43 AM
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I see that Brian had recently written in another post: "...as a fun exercise, .. those using A.I. could have a writing challenge thing where each writes and tells a story based on that weeks Challenge and using A.I. to present it in various styles etc. " I think this is a fantastic idea ! So here's my thought for the first challenge: Write a song about a favorite childhood gameHere's my submission! "PONG!"Lyrics by Dave Gill Bink - Bonk Bink - Bonk Pong! Pong! Pong! [V1] Up, down hit the bar back and forth back and forth small dot bouncing far Bink - Bonk Pong! [V2] Countless hours wasting time back and forth back and forth losing is like a crime Bink - Bonk Pong! Always good for one more game Missing school? Well that's a shame Bink - Bonk Bink - Bonk Pong! Pong! Pong! [V3] Up, down twisty twist back and forth back and forth Heaven is just like this Bink - Bonk Pong! Parents never understand high score beats a high school band Bink - Bonk Bink - Bonk Pong! Pong! Pong! Bink - Bonk Bink - Bonk Pong! Pong! Pong!
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Did you ask SUNO if it could mimic ATARI! 
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high score beats a high school band...LOL Good write challenge thread...thanx for getting it going. I had to think a bit about childhood...and thought kids need protection most...games help them visualize. Wrote a bunch this Am. Filter it some Used Udio...I like the 32 sec spot. Settled on two totally different takes. Which is better (or scrap/start over) Danger Danger The monster sleeps When it awakes It won't find me Any time Any day I can run away to my Fort For Rest First https://www.udio.com/songs/h3vUw1yDEAxS7qEu4wfvWXSecond https://www.udio.com/songs/iDXasxbdXsCGP9n1ntQ2Nr
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Fort in the trees Fort in the Forest I go to my Fort Forest
The quiet trees They will hide me When the monster runs hot The trees are cool protection
Danger Danger The monster sleeps When it awakes It won't find me Be still The trees hide me
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Did you ask SUNO if it could mimic ATARI!  HA! Good one, JAPOV!!  Looking forward to your submission! Peace, Dave
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Fort in the trees Fort in the Forest I go to my Fort Forest
The quiet trees They will hide me When the monster runs hot The trees are cool protection
Danger Danger The monster sleeps When it awakes It won't find me Be still The trees hide me This is a great visual! I remember cutting out the center of large, wild bushes in the wood line as a fort. Eventually I "borrowed" the necessary tools and material from my dad's garage to create a rudimentary ladder to scale a tree, only to learn I have a terrible fear of heights. LOL!!
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Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon
I see fear in your eyes You're not leaving here alive
Roll some smoke Wizards are funny Clerics are boring My harpies are horny
Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer
Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon
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Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon
I see fear in your eyes You're not leaving here alive
Roll some smoke Wizards are funny Clerics are boring My harpies are horny
Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer
Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon NICE!! Looking forward to your AI produced version of this one!! Peace, Dave
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Fort in the trees Fort in the Forest I go to my Fort Forest
The quiet trees They will hide me When the monster runs hot The trees are cool protection
Danger Danger The monster sleeps When it awakes It won't find me Be still The trees hide me This is a great visual! I remember cutting out the center of large, wild bushes in the wood line as a fort. Eventually I "borrowed" the necessary tools and material from my dad's garage to create a rudimentary ladder to scale a tree, only to learn I have a terrible fear of heights. LOL!! Thanks Dave! The fear discovery you mention (funny!), might be an interesting addition to the lyric...lol.
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Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon
I see fear in your eyes You're not leaving here alive
Roll some smoke Wizards are funny Clerics are boring My harpies are horny
Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer
Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon nice crisp little summary of 'dungeons and dragons', tony! ....Tony doesn't need any stinking AI (said w mexican pirate accent).....maybe he'll add his own produced??
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Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon
I see fear in your eyes You're not leaving here alive
Roll some smoke Wizards are funny Clerics are boring My harpies are horny
Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer Cheetos-n-Beer
Magical dragons Dice of destruction I'm your master Welcome to my dungeon nice crisp little summary of 'dungeons and dragons', tony! ....Tony doesn't need any stinking AI (said w mexican pirate accent).....maybe he'll add his own produced?? Naah', This one's for you guys. Go ahead, have at it 
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Naah', This one's for you guys. Go ahead, have at it  and with that, ladies and gentlemen I present to you..... "DM Nightmare!"
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Naah', This one's for you guys. Go ahead, have at it  and with that, ladies and gentlemen I present to you..... "DM Nightmare!"Yep, I would have done it just like THAT! 
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Here's one of my favorite games... ROLL THE DICEhttps://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14926991[Verse 1] I’m sitting at the table, feeling so alive Got my token ready, gonna take a dive Board is set, we’re all in the game Buying properties, it’s never the same I’m landing on Park Place, looking fine Gonna make that deal and take what’s mine I’ll take the yellow, you’ll take the green It’s a game of money, I’m living the dream! [Pre-Chorus] A little cash, a little luck Building hotels, baby, that’s my stuff I’m not going down without a fight Monopoly, it’s a game of might! [Chorus] Roll the dice, take a chance tonight Let’s go round the board, yeah, we’re feeling right We’re playing hard, we’re playing strong In this Monopoly game, we all belong Pass Go, collect your pay Don’t get caught in the rent trap today! Whoa, roll the dice Whoa, roll the dice [Break] [Verse 2] I’ve got a hotel on Boardwalk now Making moves, don’t ask me how You’re on my space, better watch your back I’m cashing in, no time to slack You can try to get ahead, but I won’t budge Trading, wheeling, got the power to judge Let’s shake it up, make a deal It’s all about the power, it’s all about the feel! [Pre-Chorus] A little cash, a little luck Building hotels, baby, that’s my stuff I’m not going down without a fight Monopoly, it’s a game of might! [Chorus] Roll the dice, take a chance tonight Let’s go round the board, yeah, we’re feeling right We’re playing hard, we’re playing strong In this Monopoly game, we all belong Pass Go, collect your pay Don’t get caught in the rent trap today! Whoa, roll the dice Whoa, roll the dice [Bridge] Free Parking, here we go! Collect your dreams, let the money flow Jail’s just a stop, won’t let it hold me down I’ll be out soon, making my rounds I’ll trade you my red for your blue You know it’s a deal, I’m all about the move It’s all about the cash and the stakes Winning this game is what it takes! [Interlude] [Chorus] Roll the dice, take a chance tonight Let’s go round the board, yeah, we’re feeling right We’re playing hard, we’re playing strong In this Monopoly game, we all belong Pass Go, collect your pay Don’t get caught in the rent trap today! Whoa, roll the dice Whoa, roll the dice [Outro] Roll the dice, baby, roll the dice, In the world of Monopoly, we paythe price Whoa, roll the dice Whoa, roll the dice
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Now THAT'S what I'm talkin' about, Rob!!!
Well done, sir!!
Peace,
Dave
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Thanks Dave. You know what? I like it too. I wasn't taking this very seriously, but man, this one is good.
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This is a fun challenge. I thought I'd give it another try. Here is The Chessboard Blues. When I was a kid, I loved to play chess. The Chessboard Blueshttps://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14927084[Verse] I set the pieces on the board A battlefield of mind and sword With pawns that march and knights that leap In this game where secrets keep The king moves slow, but he's the boss While the queen can slide and she can cross The rooks make their own straight lines And bishops cut across the signs [Chorus] Whoa, the chessboard’s calling me A game of strategy, can’t you see Every move’s a mystery Checkmate, and if I lose I’ll have the chessboard blues Whoa, the chessboard blues [Verse] I’m calculating every plan With every piece, a different stand A sacrifice to win the fight The endgame’s drawing near tonight The clock’s ticking down, I feel the heat Will I be the one to face defeat But I won’t fold, I’ll make my stand Every move, part of the grand plan [Chorus] Whoa, the chessboard’s calling me A game of strategy, can’t you see Every move’s a mystery Checkmate, and if I lose I’ll have the chessboard blues Whoa, the chessboard blues [Bridge] King and queen, in the final dance A knight’s last move, a last chance I take a breath, it’s do or die And with that move, I win or fly [Interlude] [Chorus] Whoa, the chessboard’s calling me A game of strategy, can’t you see Every move’s a mystery Checkmate, and if I lose I’ll have the chessboard blues Whoa, the chessboard blues [Outro] They call it the chessboard blues Whoa, the chessboard blues
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King of the Castle!!! Warning: the only creative aspect I contributed is the idea and the title. ALL the rest is Suno. Bill https://suno.com/song/ce1a77cc-9d80-46dd-8567-bf9fa196a5dc[Verse] I'm the king of the castle my crown is made of cheese Playing knights and dragons swinging sticks as if they’re keys Guarding all my Legos with my teddy bear brigade Building up the fort to shield against the great invade [Verse 2] You can be the jester making faces till we laugh Chasing after bubbles in a backyard photograph Spinning in a circle 'til we're dizzy on the grass Life's a royal playground when you find it in a flash [Chorus] All hail the king of the castle we're ruling the world Imagination's the royal flag we’ve unfurled On top of the mountain of dirt in the yard Kingdom of laughter where playing is hard [Bridge] Fetch the paper crowns from our cereal boxes Claiming our thrones inside the cardboard complexes Pretending we’re rich with the treasures we find Pebbles and shells Gold in our mind [Verse 3] Defend the fort from shadows of the afternoon sun Cardboard swords raised high The battle's just begun Monsters in the garden but we're never ever scared Our kingdom stretches far as long as we’ve declared [Chorus] All hail the king of the castle we're ruling the world Imagination's the royal flag we’ve unfurled On top of the mountain of dirt in the yard Kingdom of laughter where playing is hard
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Bill, amazing what AI can do these days. Nice tune, well-produced.
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Rob and Bill!!!
These are both pretty freakin' COOL, GUYS!! LOL!!!
Peace,
Dave
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Hi Dave, thanks for the feedback!
All the best - Robert
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