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VERSE:1
She climbed into my Silverado
Her tan legs had me dreamin’ ‘bout Cabo
Honeymoon suite ’n tiki drinkin’
Then she looked at me, said I’ve been thinkin’
It’s prob’ly best that we just stay friendly
Hope you still wanna hang out with me
Tearing up summer, drinkin’ till we’re drunker
‘Cuz I’ll always love you like a brother
And I said, “well, sister from another mother…”
CHORUS:
Get your pretty feet of my dash
That’s leather’s genuine Honey,
I ain’t mad But my buddy’s don’t cross that line
That’s a privilege Only girlfriends get
And you gave that one back
So get your pretty feet off my dash
VERSE 2:
If you wanna be friends
I’ll treat you like one
Don’t trash my cab
when you’re riding shotgun
Don’t spill that Shiner,
don’t light that lighter
And that spit cup better stay uprighter
or You’ll be riding that Rhino Line
CHORUS
Bridge It ain’t no welcome mat
It ain’t no porch out back
CHORUS
I hope you brought a little money girl
To kick in on the gas
Yeah, get your feet of my dash

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Originally Posted by bennash
https://hearthis.at/elvis-nash-xk/feet-off-my-dash-atmosmastered/ARG/

VERSE:1
She climbed into my Silverado
Her tan legs had me dreamin’ ‘bout Cabo
Honeymoon suite ’n tiki drinkin’
Then she looked at me, said I’ve been thinkin’
It’s prob’ly best that we just stay friendly
Hope you still wanna hang out with me
Tearing up summer, drinkin’ till we’re drunker
‘Cuz I’ll always love you like a brother
And I said, “well, sister from another mother…”
CHORUS:
Get your pretty feet of my dash
That’s leather’s genuine Honey,
I ain’t mad But my buddy’s don’t cross that line
That’s a privilege Only girlfriends get
And you gave that one back
So get your pretty feet off my dash
VERSE 2:
If you wanna be friends
I’ll treat you like one
Don’t trash my cab
when you’re riding shotgun
Don’t spill that Shiner,
don’t light that lighter
And that spit cup better stay uprighter
or You’ll be riding that Rhino Line
CHORUS
Bridge It ain’t no welcome mat
It ain’t no porch out back
CHORUS
I hope you brought a little money girl
To kick in on the gas
Yeah, get your feet of my dash


First lyric verse is great, think the second falls off a bit and the meter changes.

Much stronger lyrically than melodically and vocally.

It also doesn't seem like live musicians are you using AI or software.? Just seems kinda compressed and quantized.

Overall, good start

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No... it's all live players on this , with me singing, the same gospel BGVS I use. No AI was involved. It's sparse really , few guitar parts , bass and drums .
thanks for stopping by F

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I think this has some of the basic elements of a country hit. Original and striking hook that is easy to sing along to, attitude, a truck... This one might be pitchable. It's not my favorite song of yours, but it might be the most commercially viable. Nice one!

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it was pitched before on a demo done 2 years ago . With better connections It might have a shot . Trucks and all . No AI was involved . Session players and singers , live .
Thanks Gavin

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You have a fine sense of humour Elvis and that one's one fun listen!
Bill

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Well you know , ya gotta laugh at this stuff

Thanks Bill

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I.

Freaking.

LOVE!

THIS!!

SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Oh my gawd, Elvis!! This is awesome, man!!! LMFAO!!


Peace,

Dave


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Get your feet off my dash , women probably hate it
Thanks David


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