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My Gun
by JAPOV - 02/17/25 03:53 PM
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Experimenting with udio today. Happy Saturday! I like the different non commercial jazzy sound. seems udio is better w this kind of thing ? I made it 2 min so music not rushed and time for instrumental part. complete w fairy art (lol). https://www.udio.com/songs/nUxZUx7d3CQnP2ALxzeRZv 2m version https://www.udio.com/songs/e1VtKVJE2HS3ETc9fpdnEd 30sec version After the storm I had to survive A river of sorrow A frightening tide Are there any survivors In this time of want Gotta stay floating With a bottomless boat Choking on my heartbreak Giving up my ghost I saw you Raving On the shore Franticly Waving For me to see You've thrown a life-line to me.
Last edited by Bill Draper; 09/07/24 01:09 PM.
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Hi Bill, I like the first section, though one word sticks out of place to me, Gotta,it lowers the serious tone imo, yeah you have a really good start here all the best, john.
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