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::: OOH LALA LA OOH ::: #1198582 09/20/24 03:23 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 258 Likes: 16 Quebec Guy E. Trepanier OP Top 500 Poster
OP Guy E. Trepanier Top 500 Poster Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 258 Likes: 16 Quebec	Here is one of my songs. Rough demo: My voice + ukulele soundclick: https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14852784 soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/guyet-951277639/ooh-lala-la-ooh-uke youtube: OOH LALA LA OOH (e) ______________________________________________________ © Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2023. All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier. Intro: 8 bars (key of A) She was right there in front of me Wearing a tight blue sexy dress She turned around and look at me Then she gave me a killer smile With a subtle ravishing voice She said to me: you're a good choice! Ooh lala lalalala --- chorus Ooh lala la Ooh Ooh lala lalalala Ooh lala la Ooh Ooh lala lalalala Ooh lala la Ooh Ooh lala lalalala Ooh lala la Ooh Then she came very close to me While she took off her sexy dress She whispered: Babe I like to play I'm gonna make you play my way With a subtle ravishing voice She said to me: you're a good choice! Chorus Interlude: 8 bars Then she decided to leave the room While she put back her sexy dress She gave me a sweet little kiss She left me there with my own bliss With a subtle ravishing voice She said to me: you're a good choice! Chorus Ooh lala la Ooh Guy E. Trépanier #628 Melody and lyrics: 2023-11. K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable Soundclick: Songs buy Guy E. Trepanier Soundcloud: UkeGuy (songs with lyricists)

Re: ::: OOH LALA LA OOH ::: Guy E. Trepanier #1198583 09/21/24 12:13 AM
Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 668 Likes: 24 Germany Rob B. Top 500 Poster
Rob B. Top 500 Poster Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 668 Likes: 24 Germany	Hi Guy, I really enjoyed this. Well done. You should take a close look at the rhyme scheme of your verses. Verses 2 and 3 have an A-B-C-C rhyme scheme, while verse 1 has an A-B-A-C rhyme scheme. All the best - Robert Last edited by Rob B.; 09/21/24 12:14 AM.

Re: ::: OOH LALA LA OOH ::: Guy E. Trepanier #1198591 09/22/24 11:55 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 12,278 Likes: 4 Kendal, Cumbria .UK T Travis david Top 10 Poster
Travis david Top 10 Poster T Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 12,278 Likes: 4 Kendal, Cumbria .UK	Good song nice catchy tune. Enjoyed the listen John We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde

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