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Rt 23
by bennash - 10/08/24 02:29 PM
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Extinct
by bennash - 10/06/24 11:06 AM
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Not Bad
by David Gill - 10/04/24 03:21 PM
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I'm finally back in my home recording studio in Florida. I composed and recorded music for Carroll Kiphen's lyrics " The One You Love". I created the vocals with Dreamtonics Software. Feedback is always appreciated. THE ONE YOU LOVEhttps://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14848298Verse 1: You're bored with me, bored with our life You tell me that you want more But I'm not sure you understand What it is you're looking for Verse 2: We don't have to go to Paris To enjoy drinking our wine Don't have to visit Vegas Just to have a real good time Pre chorus You're thirsty for excitement So, you're chasing after clouds When the key to happiness Is what we've already found Chorus It's not what you're doing It's not where you are What matters is Being with The one you love Verse 3: We could fly off to Niagara Watch the falls tumbling down Pretend we're on our honeymoon Have a night out on the town Verse 4: You could take a cruise to Cancun Enjoy the tropical breeze Drink margaritas by the sea Recall how we used to be Pre chorus Chorus Bridge Let's have a date and stay up late Shake up the old routine Remember that we're good together Create a few new dreams Chorus
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Good one! Appreciate you using the lyric.
Ckiphen
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Rob
Pretty melody, Pleasant lyrics.
But the beat makes the song a little "static" to my ear.
Overall, liked it.
Marty
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Thank you Marty. I wish my musical skills were better.
All the best - Robert
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