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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/12/24 09:36 AM
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Joined: Jun 2011
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We never made it all the way
V
Cold morning mist replaced the summer sun
most trees are bare since autumn begun it's run
How many times have we walked through this park?
Never dreamed it'd come to this, but got it wrong
C
We never made it all the way did we?
You had to choose that well worn line,
need to be free.
We never made it all the way did we?
In no uncertain terms, theres no more you and me
We never made it all the way did we?
I'm alone now so lost in my thoughts of you
So go on tell me,what do I do to be free?
V
I still tread the same paths, the same folks walk by
an old lady said, on your own? Don't mean to pry
Told her you'd gone away for a short while,
when she walked on, I wiped tears from my eye.
B The old man with the cute dog,
the woman who feeds the birds
Smiled and waved as usual.
The wind gathered up, blew an eerie chill
was that your voice that I heard?
C
Music
V Got back home avoiding our little Caffè
Where we'd sit from a walk pass a hour away
I'd tell lies saying this is my last goodbye.
need you more than I can forget you each day
C
Last edited by Travis david; 09/28/22 01:30 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hey Travis,
How are you doing? I haven't seen you in forever, though it says you have been online here?
Brian
Brian Austin Whitney Founder Just Plain Folks jpfolkspro@gmail.com Skype: Brian Austin Whitney Facebook: www.facebook.com/justplainfolks"Don't sit around and wait for success to come to you... it doesn't know the way." -Brian Austin Whitney "It's easier to be the bigger man when you actually are..." -Brian Austin Whitney "Sometimes all you have to do to inspire humans to greatness is to give them a reason and opportunity to do something great." -Brian Austin Whitney
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Hi Brian
Just picked up your message. I'm fine thanks I hope you are as well?
I chip in on FB from time to time as you know.
I don't write as often as I used too, probably the reason
Regards
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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This is exceptional writing, and IMO would be a great song....you take the reader along with you as you tell your story...because so many of them relate to your words...and you tell that story in a plain speaking manner...
These lines really stand out for me...says it all in few words
You had to choose that well worn line,
need to be free.
And the small bits of memories...superb
This is one of the best lyrics to grace this site in some time
Thank you for posting
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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