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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/12/24 09:36 AM
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Stay The Hell Away https://soundcloud.com/sunset-poet-of-texas/240805-stay-the-hell-awayMARTY Chord Structure. Lyrics, Song melodies, Lead Vox, Rhythm Guitar(s) VSTs and midi rolls for strings, Bass, Drums, Piano texture from EZKEYS Sound Engineering (such as it is) JAIME HERNANDEZ Lead Guitar, solos & fills, Backing vox LYRICS V1 I don't wanna fall in love again I don't wanna feel the hurt We’ve tried so many times We aint ever gonna work I dont wanna lay in bed alone Mullin’ over what went wrong I dont wanna play this guitar Singing that same sad song. PreCH But I miss you babe There’s no denying that I miss you babe But I never, ever want you back CH1 Stay the hell away from me I don't wanna feel the ecstasy, Of your body writhing next to me Just stay the hell away. I don't wanna feel your moistened lips Glide beneath my fingertips Or the sultry wetness of your kiss Just stay the hell away From me. V2 I dont wanna think about last time you kicked me to the curb So many painful memories I’d jus’ soon not disturb I’ve got my life in order now I ain’t gon’ have you in it. So hear my mind, forget my heart You’re grip is gone, we’re finished CH2 SOLO BR I’ve been your slave from the very start Your wrapped your chain around my broken heart Now I’ve broken free I’m living life for me Just me
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Hey Marty , that's a good one man . flows well .
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Very emotional. I can feel it. Good production work. It would be good if you could post the lyrics here. The instrumentation is good. The guitar solo is awesome. Nice vocals. Well done. Congratulations!
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This is excellent, Marty,...your vocal carries the emotion throughout...the guitar and drum fills are top notch and I really like the instrumentation in behind the vocals...one of your best..great production value
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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Ben, Rob, Steve....
Thanks for the encouragement. I truly appreciate it.
Jaime, the guitarist, came over today and we listened to the song a few times in the course of mixing, mastering and setting it up for Spotify.
Then we put it up on Spotify.
When we finished, we met another buddy for a celebratory drink.
In the truck, on the way home, the novice audio engineer in me, is already hearing things that I am not liking.
That axiom, "life's a bitch and then you die" came to mind as some of the air flowed out of my balloon.
Nonetheless, the song has been blast to struggle with. The most fun that I have ever had with a song, and I deeply appreciate your comments.
Marty
Rob, I'll put the lyrics up in the AM.
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Do you own an electric guitar? This song is WAAY too mellow lol 
The journey is definitely more important than the destination...
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"Mellow" was the goal. Thank you for noticing.  Not me on the electric. A friend named Jaime Hernandez.
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Love the sound. Great character in the voice'
The song is really good. Great concept!
Good stuff! Awesome hook!
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Oh, com'on man... The title is, "STAY THE HELL AWAY" OZZY could do a whole album with that! 
The journey is definitely more important than the destination...
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Love the sound. Great character in the voice'
The song is really good. Great concept!
Good stuff! Awesome hook! Thanks Tom, Waking up to see encouragement was a nice start to the day. Have a good day yourself. Marty
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It would be good if you could post the lyrics here. Lyrics are up in first post Rob. Thanks again for listening.
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Excellent job on that song Marty. Worthy of Spotify methinks!
Bill
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Excellent job on that song Marty. Worthy of Spotify methinks!
Bill Thanks Bill. It went live on Spotify today. Just got back from having a Spotify beer with the guitarist. Marty
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Great stuff, Marty! Wonderfully atmospheric vocals as usual and you have a way of putting across a song as if you're talking to me. Excellent production - feels like you're in the room.
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Great stuff, Marty! Wonderfully atmospheric vocals as usual and you have a way of putting across a song as if you're talking to me. Excellent production - feels like you're in the room. Thanks Gavin. The "talkin to me" comment is the best compliment that I could hope for. And I spent hours trying to get all of this song..."in the room." Thanks for saying that I did. It makes me feel great. Regards Marty
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