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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/12/24 09:36 AM
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Joined: Jul 2017
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https://on.soundcloud.com/CRt3W6HmoD6YwX6f8I want that from you Verse I learned something about you yesterday That has me thinking. You might be someone worth dating longer. Be worth me keeping. Pre chorus You were out playing ball With the neighborhood kids. Laughing having fun. The way that my dad did. Chorus It changes the way I see you. I see my dad in you. I see how he loves momma And I want that from you. Verse You show kindness when its unexpected That has me thinking. You may be worth me investigating What else you’re hiding. Pre chorus You know my special song. What brand perfume I wear. Somethings different with you. I never doubt you care. Chorus It changes the way I see you. I see my dad in you. I see how he loves momma And I want that from you. Bridge My mom is the happiest woman That I’ve ever seen. She days find a man who’s like your dad. You’ll find what love means. Tag I see how he loves momma And I want that from you.
Ckiphen
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Hey Carroll,
as always, the lyrics are very well-written. I love the story you're telling. The only line that doesn't work is a bridge line: "She days find a man who's like your Dad". I assume you meant "She says...". The AI tools always sing what you write, therefore you have to double-check your lyrics before you upload them. I love the genre, the melody and instrumentation. This is an extremely good song. Well done.
All the best
Robert
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Yes. Great sentiment. Cool that Suno can bring it along so well.Enjoyed!
Bill
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Hey there Ckiphen......
I have to agree.... good lyrics.
Good stuff!
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