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I recorded this one around 10 years ago with a female vocalist. It’s one of my best songs. I uploaded my lyrics in Suno. This new version sounds pretty good to me, but the original is still slightly better. This is a nightmare about a hit and run felony.

Don’t Look Back
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[Verse]
You wake up and you open your eyes
Where are you now, you’re completely surprised
Your brain hurts while you think about last night
You drove your car stoned

A loud noise, bodies flying through the air
You hit the brakes, man it was in complete despair
The night was dark, they were dressed in black
You pushed the pedal down and never looked back, (no)

[Chorus]
You can run and you can hide
But you can’t apologize
You can’t change what you feel inside
You sound like a bag of lies
You can’t turn back the hands of time
And you can’t get back on track
What you say ain’t worth a dime
So don’t – just don’t look back

[Verse]
This is a bad case of hit and run
Should you give up or get yourself a shotgun
Got no friends that you can turn to
No one can tell you, what you should do

Do you wanna commit suicide?
‘Cause their searching for you nationwide
It’s not the way you had your life laid out
You’re to blame without a shadow of a doubt

[Chorus]
You can run and you can hide
But you can’t apologize
You can’t change what you feel inside
You sound like a bag of lies

[Rap bridge]
As the fog clears, I can see your pretty face
You hold me tight girl, I feel your warm embrace
And then you tell me that I had a bad dream
You woke me up, ‘cause I started to scream, aah
It felt so real, as if I was really there
But it was just a great big bad nightmare
Now every time I go to bed I still hear
This voice inside my head filling me with fear, fear, fear, fear

[Chorus]
You can run and you can hide
But you can’t apologize
You can’t change what you feel inside
You sound like a bag of lies
You can’t turn back the hands of time
And you can’t get back on track
What you say ain’t worth a dime
So don’t - just don’t look back

You can run and you can hide
But you can’t apologize (apologize)
What you say ain’t worth a dime
So don’t - don’t look back

As the fog clears, I can see your pretty face
You hold me tight girl, I feel your warm embrace
And then you tell me that I had a bad dream
You woke me up, ‘cause I started to scream, aah
It felt so real, as if I was really there
But it was just a great big bad nightmare
It’s not the way you had your life laid out
You’re to blame without a shadow of a doubt

What you say ain’t worth a dime
So don’t - don’t look back

Yeah sounds good , But their stolen tracks . Already been proven your robbing session players blind, Your paying a penny for stolden tracks . if that. Yeah your hit and run. F Carrol and you .

DUDE!?! O_0

Hey Elvis,
I understand what you're saying and to be honest ... I still don't have a good feeling working with AI. The sound is surely stolen. The track I'd assume isn't, unless you show me a song with the same chords and timing. I wasn't aware of the fact that stealing someone's sound is against the law. Eventually AI will change a lot of things in our lives. The earlier we adapt, the better.

Btw, I wrote these lyrics. Carroll had nothing to do with this one. So F just me, lol.

all right enough bitching by me and Sony , sounds good , see if the fish are biting , Being Jesus is tiring. That's good angle , v1 church blah blah blah , chorus drunk in bars blah blah blah , cuz its tiring following Jesus

This is really good Rob....love how you used the rap bridge...before I even saw it noted as rap, I thought ..."that's rap" ...so your goal IMO was accomplished...what I really like about this is ...once your happy with what you have, your options open up as to how you want to pitch the song...cool what you are doing

Steve