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Foxwarren
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Foray
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Poof
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Did you ask Jersey2008 for permission to use his old lyric? What does he think about the results?
It's not my cup of tea, but that doesn't mean anything.
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Ohh, now I got it. YOU were Jersey2008 before that account was banned here.
It's still not my cup of tea, but that's nothing to get angry about. That doesn't mean the song is not good.
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Dom
You write unremarkable songs about odd things. I know that you think that its Shakespeare but it's not. You are simply a broken child.
Now with AI, you and addled teenagers everywhere can produce this robot drivel prolifically and tell yourselves that it was you that did it..
Unless this deluge is managed, this site and all such sites are going to drown in an ocean of this nothingness produced by unskilled, talentless hacks. Billions of songs about odd, undesirable notions of mostly nothing topics.
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I like the lyrical uniqueness.... haven't listened to music yet. Looking forward to some 2024 lyrics from Fd.
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Dom
You write unremarkable songs about odd things. I know that you think that its Shakespeare but it's not. You are simply a broken child.
Now with AI, you and addled teenagers everywhere can produce this robot drivel prolifically and tell yourselves that it was you that did it..
Unless this deluge is managed, this site and all such sites are going to drown in an ocean of this nothingness produced by unskilled, talentless hacks. Billions of songs about odd, undesirable notions of mostly nothing topics. Ii decided every time you open your mouth ten more songs will come Everybody knows Im better than you Marty, it doesn't matter what you say or do Nobody needs to hear gonna take a pass or just another errand
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I like the lyrical uniqueness.... haven't listened to music yet. Looking forward to some 2024 lyrics from Fd.
Bill That's a start
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Looking forward to some 2024 lyrics from Fd.
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Bill - it looks like you missed Fdem's lyric of the year 2024 "Chillin Today" with epic lines like "Your coying eyes were bowling balls". That one recently went up in smoke ... poof. That one was one of his best ever.
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Great hook : I kinda missed the 80ties and rock and roll , But sounds good .
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Dom
The only remarkable thing about you or your songs is that you, as a self-appointed panel of one think that they are great. They aren't. It's ridiculous. The greatness claim doesn't come from the song. It comes from the mental disorder that drives you to argue with everybody on this site, call them all sorts of little school girl names.. and then expect them to like you and compliment your goofy songs.
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Thanks for the link Fd. Bill
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Thanks for the link to that one too. Bill
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Dom
The only remarkable thing about you or your songs is that you, as a self-appointed panel of one think that they are great. They aren't. It's ridiculous. The greatness claim doesn't come from the song. It comes from the mental disorder that drives you to argue with everybody on this site, call them all sorts of little school girl names.. and then expect them to like you and compliment your goofy songs. Did I post the song and say ...this is remarkable? It's garage rock song I dont think any garage song fits the remarkable bill It's supposed to be cool, and fun. I can write in many genres you have zero understanding beyond your pathetic I'm gonna take a pass. I make no claims for excellence l, but a talentless troll like you is not going to berrate my work
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You make ridiculous ad naseum claims about the talent and excellence of your writing. You have demanded nearly everyone here with dismissive such as...songwriting midgets.
You are just argumentative Dom. You're clinical. You are a mental case. I suspect that is not news to you.
Your songs are the blatherings of a mental case. You proclamations and insults are the ramblings of a mental case.
But alas...A Van Gogh, you are not. Just the crazy without the remarkable talent.
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You make ridiculous ad naseum claims about the talent and excellence of your writing. You have demanded nearly everyone here with dismissive such as...songwriting midgets.
You are just argumentative Dom. You're clinical. You are a mental case. I suspect that is not news to you.
Your songs are the blatherings of a mental case. You proclamations and insults are the ramblings of a mental case.
But alas...A Van Gogh, you are not. Just the crazy without the remarkable talent. Because you attacked, recruited others to attack, it's quite clear cause and effect. Nobody is buying this. Your only doing this to get me to stop posting. You've already proven to others what you really think, they will assume now your lying. Keep the myth going, people know how I operate. If your going to attack my work, write better than gonna take acpass, you simply can't attack with that resume But again, everybody knows so stop it You will be told you suck if you attack, common sense
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So some nutjob is jilted and runs around in a thunderstorm trying to get hit by lightning in an attempt to commit suicide
I liked the way that Garth Brooks handled a thunderstorm a lot better than this.
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So some nutjob is jilted and runs around in a thunderstorm trying to get hit by lightning in an attempt to commit suicide
I liked the way that Garth Brooks handled a thunderstorm a lot better than this. hes NOT doing it at all u moron. He was dumped by a girl and hes sarcastically inventing the whole scenario, in other words, hes NOT hurt at all. What of the odds of getting killed by lightening, let alone trying to get killed by it as suicide?...in a car, with goodyear tires on it You're a brain dead tool
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Dom
If you have to explain a song, most likely you should throw it away and start over and do it right.
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If you have to explain a song, most likely you should throw it away and start over and do it right. everybody else gets/got it but you. did you read the OP? your garbage needs no explanation, it's just bad.
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Not to come off as the sarcastic hero , But maybe you guys should get a room
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Not to come off as the sarcastic hero , But maybe you guys should get a room Ben If you were to actually read my posts you would see that I am giving Dom valuable insight regarding this song. Whether or not he heeds it is another matter. Horse to water.
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I read 8 year olds on the school playground comments for a few laughs
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I read 8 year olds on the school playground comments for a few laughs Whatever makes you happy.
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Try another direction, Dom...
Wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
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Yeah but that's but what inspired it ..a dumping the whole mood shifts and music would too if the attitude shufte
Garage rock tunes are often spiteful
I dint think the title has ever been used before.
I'm gonna bump up my other stuff
Tired
If, talking about this, we dint have many rockers, guy are u i thought
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I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Paradise, neon lights
Summer nights, a playboy life
She said, "I'm gonna' ruin
your reputation"
Sunset, cold threat
Everything's better when wet
She said, "I'm gonna' play with
your imagination"
Conquest, no contest
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
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If you hadn't pointed out that it was supposed to be sarcastic, I don't think I would have got that. I would have thought it was a song about a goofy guy who thought he could actually do this. Not that it would necessarily be any the worse for that.
Infany isn't a word.
AI did an OK job on this, but I think I'm beginning to get a bit tired of it.
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Ok poof this is gone.
Tired of it are you? And .. is somebody forcing you to listen?
Cause I write and post based on what I think you might think is good.
I did the job, not Ai, ask Greg Watton up top, argue with him
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I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Paradise, neon lights
Summer nights, a playboy life
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your reputation"
Sunset, cold threat
Everything's better when wet
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your imagination"
Conquest, no contest
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Dying to be her lover
Living to love no other...
Fight or flight, last rights
I was in fear for my life
She said, "You haven't seen
anything yet"
Undressed, I confessed
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love...
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I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Paradise, neon lights
Summer nights, a playboy life
She said, "I'm gonna' ruin
your reputation"
Sunset, cold threat
Everything's better when wet
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your imagination"
Conquest, no contest
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Dying to be her lover
Living to love no other...
Fight or flight, last rights
I was in fear for my life
She said, "You haven't seen
anything yet"
Undressed, I confessed
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love... Not sure if your asking me or telling me...lol If you have a lyric you want me to do, I'll do it.im running low by now
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I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Paradise, neon lights
Summer nights, a playboy life
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Sunset, cold threat
Everything's better when wet
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Conquest, no contest
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... suicide by lightning
Dying to be her lover
Living to love no other...
Fight or flight, last rights
I was in fear for my life
She said, "You haven't seen
anything yet"
Undressed, I confessed
Ecstasy is a little death
I wasn't looking for love... Not sure if your asking me or telling me...lol If you have a lyric you want me to do, I'll do it.im running low by now Lol... You got something better to do?
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Outro;
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)...
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Just a suggestion...
(Ch)
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was...
(WithBgVOX)
(suicide by lightning, suicide by lightning,
suicide by lightning...)
(V1)
Paradise, neon lights
Summer nights, a playboy life
She said, "I'm gonna' ruin
your reputation"
(V2)
Sunset, cold threat
Everything's better when wet
She said, "I'm gonna' play with
your imagination"
(PreCh)
Conquest, no contest
Ecstasy is a little death
(Ch)
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... (WithBgVOX)
(suicide by lightning, suicide by lightning,
suicide by lightning...)
(Solo)
(Breakdown bridge)
Dying to be her lover
Living to love no other...(X3)
(V3)
Fight or flight, last rights
I was in fear for my life
She said, "You haven't seen
anything yet"
(PreCh)
Undressed, I confessed
Ecstasy is a little death
(Ch)
I wasn't looking for love
Or an angel to find me
But a one in a million smile
With eyes so inviting
Hit me like a storm
Her voice split the night
It was... (WithBgVOX)
(suicide by lightning, suicide by lightning,
suicide by lightning...)
(Outro)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)
I wasn't looking for love
(suicide by lightning)...
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Tony and Fd,
This exchange between you two, is intriguing to me.
Decide if it is a collaboration in the lyric .
Does Tony's re-write hold with Fd.
If so, who does the music? 1. Tony with all his facilities Or
2. Fd with AI.
I say:
Why not go forward w Tony's rewrite...and two versions of the song.
An AI vs human shoot out!!!
All in favour please vote
Bill
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Lyric collab? I stole his title, lol... I always write with rhythm guitar in mind, but I'm not ashamed to admit... I'm curious to hear what Dom/AI is going to do with it 
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I see big problems, on second thought.
--Artist 1 (Fd) objects to Artist 2 (Tony) rewrite
--Artist 2 does not want his re-write stolen by AI website (copyright issue)
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Lyric collab? I stole his title, lol... I always write with rhythm guitar in mind, but I'm not ashamed to admit... I'm curious to hear what Dom/AI is going to do with it You stole his hook/title. That inspire you? Admit its significance. Its your storyline, though. to me its a collab. Problem. But yeah. If Fd goes for it....it would be really great to hear his Dom/Ai...yeah? Bill
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I'm really broken up and can barely speak the sadness overwhelms me I'm feelin very weak She was greatest thing I've known so far this year the weatherman says a big thunderstorm is near So I'm gonna try... Suicide by lightning and see where it gets me let God strike me dead see how fast she forgets me the thought of bein by myself is oh so frightening My plan is tonight to try suicide by lightening It'll look like an accident can't break Mama's heart they never will suspect it have Goodyears on my car And I'll drive like a soldier on the parkway infantry knowing that my death is a near certainty it'll be... Suicide by lightning and see where it gets me let God strike me dead see how fast she forgets me the thought of bein by myself is oh so frightening my plan is tonight to try suicide by lightning I'm gonna crank the radio up at the stroke of midnight a little AC/DC seems about right gonna get jacked up in a real blaze of glory "for those about to rock" you know the story It was... Suicide by lightning and see where it gets me let God strike me dead see how fast she forgets me the thought of bein by myself is oh so frightening my plan is tonight to try suicide by lightning I see big problems, on second thought.
--Artist 1 (Fd) objects to Artist 2 (Tony) rewrite
--Artist 2 does not want his re-write stolen by AI website (copyright issue) It's not a re-write lol... I didn't expand on his concept. Read above... AI copy rights? There's hardly an audience here... So, I really don't care. I'll admit that the "title" was a fun challenge, and only a mind like Dom's could have conceived of it... Unless, ...the AC/DC song "Thunderstruck" is too similar?
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I see big problems, on second thought.
--Artist 1 (Fd) objects to Artist 2 (Tony) rewrite
--Artist 2 does not want his re-write stolen by AI website (copyright issue) It's not a re-write lol... I didn't expand on his concept. Read above... AI copy rights? There's hardly an audience here... So, I really don't care. I can't argue. I wanted to read Fd's original again. Thunderstruck...similar yeah...gotta go look at those lyrics now.
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Suicide surviving...? lol 
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Murder by carnality... seduction...? Keep writing, Dom
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Tony, that lyric is pretty darned good.
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I like the "struck by lightning" imagery combined with "the little death" lol... but, perhaps "suicide" is a bit awkward?
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homicide... fatal/fatality... felo-de-se... merciful... Phfft'... Quit overthinking ROCK n ROLL, Tony lol
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