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Yup still relavent, timeless

I don't think this one works as well as the last one I heard. AI can be a bit hit or miss, I guess, or maybe the novelty is wearing off.
Not sure your timeless claim stands up with lines like:
Now, Walter finally found a job
in the mailroom of a busy Lawyer's firm

Nobody works in a mailroom these days and the kids probably don't know what it is .

Really? I think it works great, and I'm a singer songwriter so I guess it would depend who you ask .

Timeless cause there will always be haters trying to bring people down , like you are.

Many college kids work in mail rooms, my nephew does.

Your really batting a thousand there....

https://www.indeed.com/q-mailroom-sorter-l-new-york,-ny-jobs.html

And I'm willing to help you find a mail room job ...

https://www.indeed.com/q-mail-room-l-north-carolina-jobs.html

Seasonal Mail Clerk
Samaritan's Purse
4.4out of 5
Boone, NC

Why not try it out? Your not a Songwriter that's for sure

What a smart guy

This may have been the best thing that ever happened to you. The density I don't know but ..m

Here ya go ole smartie you

What Jobs Are Available in the Mailroom?
Individuals who work in a mailroom often are tasked with sorting and organizing incoming and outgoing mail so as to make the delivery process simpler. Your duties are likely to vary depending on what kind of company or employer you work for. Two major options are either working as a mailroom clerk for a private company, sorting all of the inter-office and incoming mail from the outside, or working for the United States Postal Service. A job with the postal service may also include loading and unloading incoming and outgoing trucks with letters and packages.

The table below contains important details about working as mail clerks and mail machine operators.

Education Required High school diploma
Key Duties Assorting and filing mail
Job Growth (2020-2030) -9%* (for all postal service workers)
Mean Salary (2020) $33,700* ('for mail clerks and mail machine operators, except those working for the postal service); $53,180 (for postal service mail sorters, processors, and processing machine operators

I hope he gets a job, seriously

A normal person's reaction to what I posted:
"Thanks for taking the time to listen, Gavin and for commenting. Yeah, maybe the last one I posted turned out a bit better (you said you thought it turned out great), but I still think AI did a good job on this one.
As for the mailroom clerk, there might not be so many of them around any more, but they do still exist. Maybe not the most modern reference in the digital age, but you're wrong when you say nobody works in one any more."

An obnoxious response from an orthographically challenged dickhead always looking for a fight: "Your not a Songwriter that's for sure" and....well, see above.

No this song was buried akready, you chose not to comment on those, you targeted me.

I did nothing to you, yet you started cause somebody told you to

I have never fought with anyone on here who was respectful to me. You be a dick, I can be the worst dick you've ever seen

Gavin,
your feedback here was spot on. First, regarding the music and secondly, regarding the mailroom lyric line.

There’s a difference between mailroom jobs at the Postal Service and mailroom jobs in lawyer’s offices. The guy who wrote this lyric apparently doesn’t know that he mentioned a mailroom job in a lawyer’s office. Since a few years, law firms are implementing best practice digital mailroom solutions for the fastest and most secure method of delivery. This has accelerated since the pandemic because more and more lawyers want to work remotely. A clerk in a lawyer’s mailroom is a dying profession. Therefore you are right that the lyric is a bit outdated. His response to your feedback is absolutely unacceptable.

Gavin, what's a "live" horse race? Is that the opposite of a dead horse race?

There are tons of mail room jobs idiot, not the post office either , i posted plenty of available jobs, you might wanna apply

And live horse race compared to a simulcast.

Ya see, races are often watched and bet on, via tv simulcast, meaning you can watch a race at one track in California, while the race takes place in new York.

But a live race is actually being at the rails, watching the dirt Kick up, and see the horses faces, and hearing the trotting.

Much more exciting, you can watch on TV, but live is more exciting

Not boring like you and your music

We don't have a bright group here

You'll get no argument from me.