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I don't see it.
In a paragraph, state what makes this song great.
Start with the lyrics, because the music was generated by machines.

How could you see it, you're a shite songwriter, how would you know?

Write a better song then come see me.weite this when I was 25 your 70 still writing shite an 8th grader could write.

What your doing is letting everyone here know that when you give a comment on their song, that you are lying and are pacifying them

But learn how to write you suck

Let's start there.
If you say that I am a sh*t writer, how can you expect me to recognize your GREATness?

So for me and others here, in a paragraph , point out what backs up your claim that this song is "ANOTHER GREAT ONE THAT I"D LET GO."

Waiting with GREAT anticipation.

Great to me for where I was at time and vastly superior to your shite, by a wide margin

The vibe it was written in came through nicely.

You don't write so stop, it's older than you already

Two pathetically empty claims/insults and one about "the vibe" coming through. Which really says nothing to an adult. A stoned teen might buy into that.

You say that you are a great writer?
A truly great writer could WRITE a paragraph defining what makes his songs, poems, books GREAT.
But you cannot.

You didn't write how you recorded this and what tools you used so I assume you recorded this one on your own. You did a good job with the instrumentation and the mix. Your voice sounds great.
The intro is way too long for a hit song. You'll lose the listener even before your vocals start. The title of the song "So Many Re-Found It" gets lost in the huge chorus section. The chorus doesn't have a line that really sticks in the listener's ears. All in all, a nice song with great production work but in my opinion this doesn't have the typical characteristics of a hit song.

I think this turned out great. It's an AI production, I assume. The weakest part is the long and uninspired guitar solos, but I assume it's hard to take them out without messing up the AI result.
Scary what AI can do!

I have to know Gavin. Please state in a paragraph why this song Turned out.. great. Thank you

What??? This is an AI song? Why doesn't he say that he didn't record this himself? I was wondering how he made that recording. That explains why there is no real hook in this song. So this is just another song generated by a computer without any creative involvement by the composer/musician/producer.

Dom considers himself to be a master prompter.

Thanks Gavin, you nailed everything you said

There are many limitations in this, but it's also a great reference.

I don't like any of the solos and I think my original is better, no dynamics really.

But I'm enjoying my lyrics through a slightly different lense

Catchy beat and tune. Great production by the robot. Pretty good lyric. It all comes together, except for the guitar solos.

What song are you talking about Gavin i Don't see one?

I'll "pretend" I'm the moderator of this MP3 forum:


Gavin:
Nice participation in this thread. But "production by the robot"....inflamatory!....two minutes in the penalty box!

Fdemetrio:
Like Brian says "Are you 5" 3 days suspension from the forum to allow others to post.

Bill

He was coached to say that, only pussiess do what people tell them. Nil respect

What song is he referring too?

He's referring to the one that vanished... poof! Like so many of your songs here. You are cluttering up the MP3 section with dots and it looks like you're enjoying it.

Yep. Thinks he's funny, but just being an ass.

Wtf are you talking about?

Did Marty give you permission to say that.?

Marty wants you in bed by 9

This used to be the place to listen to cool MP3s. That was before the dot pandemic.

Not true at all I have correspondence from several members here saying this place was dead, as little as a month ago.

It didn't pick up till I started posting songs

But if your trying to bully me into silence, I'll fuckin post 100 more.i never need to write a new song and my worst better than your best, by a wide margin

May I remind you ... POOF! POOF! POOF!
Where are all those 30 songs you posted? This used to be an MP3 section. Now it has 30 "dot" threads with no songs at all. All these "dead" threads were created by you. If this section was dead a month ago, it's certainly more dead now. Where are all those songs you posted? Brian should rename this section in the "dot section".

Should songs be shite on because some old fart wants the site to be a museum?

I pray I'm not like that @ 70

LMAO
It is so forking ridiculous that a grown-up would write what Dom did, but I can't stop laughing. My eyes are watering.

Aside from that, this is a perfect example of the website that has morphed into JustPlainDomAzz.com

LMAO

ok, back to exile.

Can't we all just stop feeding the troll?