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Rob Baird
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/28/25 07:22 PM
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https://on.soundcloud.com/1H2YyhjnoLuwPUX98A love song gone wrong Verse You’ve moved on you’re happy. It’s time I did too. But all the girls I’m dating Remind me of you. They have blue eyes and blonde hair But they are not you. I play it cool and pretend I do what men do. Pre chorus I go drinking with the boys. Raise a little hell. I tell them that I dumped you. Say I’m doing swell. Chorus This heartbreaks a hiccup. A wave in the pond. A roadblock, a detour A love song gone wrong. Verse I see you you’re smiling I smile back at you But it’s not what I’m feeling I’ve still got the blues. I push it down, I hide it Cause that’s what men do. I play it cool and pretend I don’t still love you. Pre chorus I go drinking with the boys. Raise a little hell. I tell them that I dumped you. Say I’m doing swell. Chorus This heartbreaks a hiccup. A wave in the pond. A roadblock a detour A love song gone wrong.
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Hello Ckiphen.
Nice timing on this post.
I really like the easy talky language and story line...great.
I'm not strong on the hook/title. Also I think the music should be more upbeat/jaunty, consistent with singers attempt to get on w his life, juxtaposed to his hugh sorry and lose.
Just me amateur musings...see what others say.
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Hey man , some great lines , its a common theme , But it can always be done again . They do it all the time
AI guy sounds good
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