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Breathe
by Bill Draper - 01/20/25 05:32 PM
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by Barry Williams - 01/20/25 09:34 AM
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Welcome to the dom.com music production website.
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Never saw your reply. Where is everyone else,? Can we get ai board participaters?
I think we exposed some lurkers who are still among us
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Where is everyone else,? Can we get ai board participaters? The laws of supply and demand. Too much Dom. Not enough demand.
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Lol but 88 views. 1 reply
I thought my life was pretty lame. I. Can't imagine having nothing else to but read a forum.
I mean The Bible, War and peace,? rolling stone...meh.
But it makes zero sense.
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And 16 more views since I said that a few minutes ago up to 114.
Who and where are these people,?
Yeah, I'm talking to you! U wanna fight?
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And 16 more views since I said that a few minutes ago up to 114.
Who and where are these people,?
Yeah, I'm talking to you! U wanna fight? Dom What do you consider stranger? People taking a look at what is here. After reading it, they make the decision to move on without comment. OR Dom fixating on what a handful of people didn't do, and the fact that they didn't care to comment?
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And 16 more views since I said that a few minutes ago up to 114.
Who and where are these people,?
Yeah, I'm talking to you! U wanna fight? Dom What do you consider stranger? People taking a look at what is here. After reading it, they make the decision to move on without comment. OR Dom fixating on what a handful of people didn't do, and the fact that they didn't care to comment? The former . There is a purpose for doing this. It's not a handful of people either it's 116.
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And 16 more views since I said that a few minutes ago up to 114.
Who and where are these people,?
Yeah, I'm talking to you! U wanna fight? Dom What do you consider stranger? People taking a look at what is here. After reading it, they make the decision to move on without comment. OR Dom fixating on what a handful of people didn't do, and the fact that they didn't care to comment? The former . There is a purpose for doing this.
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The former . There is a purpose for doing this.
It's not a handful of people either it's 116. Wrong answer Dom. In the click-bait world, 116 is not even a handful. 25,000 is a handful...maybe, The answer was the latter. The "purpose" is your purpose. Question: Why do you believe that someone(s) else has an obligation to observe your purpose? Inquiring minds
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Don't u think the site could use 116 people,?
What reason out of the plethora of places to go online, outdoors, thousands of tv. Channels to come here and read ?
Cause they have interest.
If I wasn't going to ever reply here I wouldn't post anything and I wouldn't read.
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If I wasn't going to ever reply here I wouldn't post anything and I wouldn't read. Well Dom, If they choose not to interact and just lurk, they break no laws and breach no contracts in doing so. You are going to have to accept their right to do so.
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In my opinion, the only good thing about this song/demo is the chorus. It sounds great. Really catchy. Congrats. But the rest … sorry … just doesn’t work. The intro is a bit too long. The music sounds outdated. In line 3 of both verses the singer has problems fitting all the words in. Those lines don’t flow well with the music. The demo covers only a small part of the song. The rhyme scheme in the bridge is not consistent. In the first 4 lines you have a A-B-A-B scheme which is good. In the second 4 lines it’s an A-B-C-B scheme which doesn’t really work well.
I’ve been playing around with these AI song generators too. They are nice. They give you ideas. But in the end, they take creativity away from you. They compose tunes, record instruments, define a vocal melody, they sing for you, they even write lines that might be missing. When done, you have to you ask yourself, how much of that song came from you? I find it astonishing how you identify yourself with the results. But ok, if you’re a pure lyricist this software turns your poems into songs. I prefer to collaborate with talented writers, musicians, producers.
Btw, getting a lot of views doesn’t mean you have a hit or a good song. I was one of them and your song didn’t hit me straight in the face. You noticed yourself that hardly anybody comments your song. I am one of the few to give you some feedback.
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In my opinion, the only good thing about this song/demo is the chorus. It sounds great. Really catchy. Congrats. But the rest … sorry … just doesn’t work. The intro is a bit too long. The music sounds outdated. In line 3 of both verses the singer has problems fitting all the words in. Those lines don’t flow well with the music. The demo covers only a small part of the song. The rhyme scheme in the bridge is not consistent. In the first 4 lines you have a A-B-A-B scheme which is good. In the second 4 lines it’s an A-B-C-B scheme which doesn’t really work well.
I’ve been playing around with these AI song generators too. They are nice. They give you ideas. But in the end, they take creativity away from you. They compose tunes, record instruments, define a vocal melody, they sing for you, they even write lines that might be missing. When done, you have to you ask yourself, how much of that song came from you? I find it astonishing how you identify yourself with the results. But ok, if you’re a pure lyricist this software turns your poems into songs. I prefer to collaborate with talented writers, musicians, producers.
Btw, getting a lot of views doesn’t mean you have a hit or a good song. I was one of them and your song didn’t hit me straight in the face. You noticed yourself that hardly anybody comments your song. I am one of the few to give you some feedback. Well I think it's a really good start and snap shot. Your song is ten times weaker id be working on that instead of looking for vengeance
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Vengeance? That was honest feedback. Don't be astonished if nobody comments your songs in the future. I surely won't. I regret I did. I was only trying to help.
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Vengeance? That was honest feedback. Don't be astonished if nobody comments your songs in the future. I surely won't. I regret I did. I was only trying to help. Promise?
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Don't u think the site could use 116 people,?
What reason out of the plethora of places to go online, outdoors, thousands of tv. Channels to come here and read ?
Cause they have interest.
If I wasn't going to ever reply here I wouldn't post anything and I wouldn't read. To be honest, I think some of those views are people having a quiet chuckle watching you guys work yourselves up into a mudslinging frenzy over nothing. I would never do that, of course, but others, less high minded than me, might.
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To be honest, I think some of those views are people having a quiet chuckle watching you guys work yourselves up into a mudslinging frenzy over nothing. I would never do that, of course, but others, less high minded than me, might. So you, in contrast to those low minded beings who quietly and insidiously chuckle.... Read every post in this "mud slinging frenzy over nothing" Drop in your own little cryptic insult... Yet, somehow, remain above the fray. No, actually you don't. In actuality you engaged it and made yourself a party to it. So now those people who lurk are also chuckling at you. I hear that there is still a coaching job open on the National Egyptian Swim Team. Dom doesnt want it. I think that it's yours if you want it.
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Egyptian swim-girls are "easy"
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To be honest, I think some of those views are people having a quiet chuckle watching you guys work yourselves up into a mudslinging frenzy over nothing. I would never do that, of course, but others, less high minded than me, might. So you, in contrast to those low minded beings who quietly and insidiously chuckle.... Read every post in this "mud slinging frenzy over nothing" Drop in your own little cryptic insult... Yet, somehow, remain above the fray. No, actually you don't. In actuality you engaged it and made yourself a party to it. So now those people who lurk are also chuckling at you. I hear that there is still a coaching job open on the National Egyptian Swim Team. Dom doesnt want it. I think that it's yours if you want it. FFS, I was being ironic. Poking fun at myself for being one of those lurkers as much as at you guys for providing the entertainment that draws the views. Self awareness is a pretty rare commodity around here. I could see where this was headed from the start and I can't pretend I haven't enjoyed it just a little bit. My point is that I'm probably not alone in my guilty pleasure and that might explain some of those views that Dom mentions. And yes, a quick review of the thread confirms that you are all slinging mud at each other over nothing very much in the best JPF tradition. And now I've got splattered with mud too LOL.
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Egyptian swim-girls are "easy" It is not the girls. Dom and Gavin are both highly eligible for positions on the Egyptian Swim Team because it is well known that they already spend so much time in da' Nile. js...really? the url?
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