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Rain
by bennash - 12/12/24 07:38 PM
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Curtis
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 07:05 PM
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Icehouse
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 06:53 PM
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Janita
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/11/24 08:26 PM
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El Lopo
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/09/24 11:18 AM
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Like Fdemetrio, I picked up on the UDIO website and eeked out my own lyric... and used the softwares suggested singer and music. Its kinda nice. Lyric almost makes sense the way the female sings it. It is a good learning tool yeah. I might try to figure out the chords and give it a sing. Any suggestions on lyric change gladly appreciated. Cheers! Bill https://www.udio.com/songs/8TgT9ERVF2x4PVP2rsKfjTIntro Gotta Keep Gotta Keep Gotta Keep Running Gotta Keep Gotta Keep Running Verse 1 What can I say You're going away I'll see you again one day soon Verse 2 Soon you will be Happy and free Running Running Running To Me! BOOM Bridge A jury of tears Attending A flurry of fears Ascending All of my angels were there Defending With no angle pending I won the day And home again to you A jury of tears Attending A flurry of fears Ascending All of my angels were there Defending With no angle pending I won the day Tag And home again to you Through all these trials One thought remained To be home again with you
Last edited by Bill Draper; 04/18/24 01:32 AM.
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I remember your hook jury of tears
You generated the rest?
Sounds like sma old school country or folk ballad.
It's interesting how that thing if it creates the whole thing itself it will make a full song.
It just won't let you make a full song out of your own song.
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I wrote all the words.
I had a difficult time getting an intro in there....it kept giving me some mumbled thing...funny....but finally accepted the Gotta Keep...with the measure of the mumbling....like it was prompting for it...ha!
The software did the second sing of the bridge in that subdued harmony. I added the tag and liked the intrumental outro. None of that music is mine or my idea...total pirated.
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Well that's interesting cause your using sparse lines, and that enabled you to get a full song
So it must go by line length
The shorter the lyric the longer the song will be
Keep ba jng fun with it
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that sounds damn close to being real , These robots will replace us yet , pretty cool song , simple and sweet
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Well that's interesting cause your using sparse lines, and that enabled you to get a full song
So it must go by line length
The shorter the lyric the longer the song will be
Keep ba jng fun with it I think so yes. I just fed it bits. This software encourages that...33 sec to start. If you give it lots a lyric....it adjusts with beats per minute to get it in. BPM variance is genre related, etc,etc. With the first 33 secs, and the lines fed in, you can click on refresh or redo, keep doing over and over again, until you hit on some music bite that more closely matches your own head music. Once you get that, begin feeding it other parts of the lyric, chorus, bridge.... I like the results you are getting yourself, although I detect disappointment, as it isn't grabbing the music in your head close enough. Fun though , heh? Bill
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that sounds damn close to being real , These robots will replace us yet , pretty cool song , simple and sweet Thanks for the listen and comment Elvis. This is the description the software mice were tread mill working: "Indie folk, Folk, Contemporary folk, Melodic, Passionate, Singer-songwriter, Lush, Acoustic, Melancholic" Bill
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Not a style that I know anything about.
But I enjoyed it and the software is a fascination.
Marty
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Intro
Gotta keep
Gotta keep
I've gotta keep
running
Gotta keep
I've gotta keep
running
Verse I
What can I say
You're going away (Singer pronounces it single syllable 'Your' instead of two syllable 'You're' u-er. Little things matter.)
I'll see you again
one day
soon
Verse II
Soon you will be
happy and free
Running Running Running ng mm M
to me!
BOOM (Should get more emphasis in enunciation.)
(Bridge) (I'd call this the Chorus. But entitling the Composition "Holding On For Tomorrow" but not using that Line 3 to 5 times makes it a poem instead of a Song Lyric.)
(I'd 'flip' these Lines)
A jury of tears
Attending
A flurry of fears
Ascending
(Like this;)
A flurry of fears
Ascending!
A jury of tears
Attending!
(and sing;)
tears born of sorrow.
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow.
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow.
(Here I'd expect a Repeat of Verse Structure, as in your VI, VII, same or near same syllable count, enabling singing of same Melody. You don't label these Stanzas.)
Verse III
Angels were there
playing in your hair!
Dancing on the
ceiling of
your room!
(Since your VII differs from VI, they may consolidate into component Movements of a single Verse. What I designate as VIII then could duplicate the VI-Vii Structure you have, and just be VII.)
Visions I see
You by the sea
Running! Running! Running
to ng me!
BOOM!
(Repeat Chorus)
And home again to you
A jury of tears
Attending
A flurry of fears
Ascending
Tag (A final Musical Movement is a 'Coda. 'Tag' is a common slang.)
And home again to you
Through all these trials
One thought remained
To be home again with you
(If you use the Tag, I'd still end with the Title Line.)
I'ng m Holding On For Tommorrow!
Restructured Lyric suggestion below, without notes.)
There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com
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"Holding On For Tomorrow" Copyright Bill Draper 4/18/24
(Introductory Movement)
Gotta keep
Gotta keep
I've gotta keep
running
Gotta keep
I've gotta keep
running
Verse I
What can I say?
You're going away!
I'll see you again,
one day,
soon.
Soon you will be,
happy and free,
Running! Running! Running,
to me!
BOOM!
(Chorus)
A flurry of fears,
ascending!
A jury of tears,
attending!
Tears born of sorrow.
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow.
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow.
(Verse II)
Angels were there,
playing in your hair!
Dancing on the
ceiling of
your room!
Visions I see,
You by the sea
Running! Running! Running
to me!
BOOM!
(Repeat Chorus)
A flurry of fears
ascending!
A jury of tears
attending!
Tears born of sorrow.
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow.
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow.
(Coda)
Through all these trials
One thought remained;
To be home again with you!
Home again with you!
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow!
I'm Holding On For Tomorrow!
There will always be another song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com
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Thanks Gary for the edit and copyright indication...appreciated.
I'll print it off for my files and credits to you.
Bill
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Really interesting, Bill...I'm impressed with what I am hearing...I may be at the age where I should be pushing back hard against things like "eh eye" (fellow Canadian) but I'm a fan of where it can take people in music and it can be very positive for music...and in the end it will be the public deciding the fate of AI and as Stevie Nicks says "nothing else matters"...AI does nothing more than what has been done forever...just a billion times faster
what I liked on this song was the phrasing....that's cool stuff
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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Man if robots get any better , We better take up fishing , its a pretty song man , kudos
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