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My Gun
by JAPOV - 02/17/25 03:53 PM
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I'm not sure what they did to my bridge, they took my second chorus and used that as a bridge.
My actual bridge they took into left field.
Couldn't get same feel with male vocal. Clearly a guy song
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As I think about this, I think they are channeling sheryl Crow.
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hey Dom, I have been using the "udio.com" beta software as well and know what you mean about the bridge, etc...AI has a mind of its own...lol.
That said. I really like the way you turned this one out...great! The first chorus is terrific....I wanted to hear it again yeah.
Turning the next chorus sing into a "Bridge"....was a susprise, but on second listen...that was terrific as well...love the harmonies and minor chords...the music composition takes a dive into a richer "sadness"
and then the ending is amazing to me. Almost like the Beatles would do...big susprise and a further sinking into...what?...time takes its toll.
Does sound like sheryl crow. wow...cool song! Bill
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hey Dom, I have been using the "udio.com" beta software as well and know what you mean about the bridge, etc...AI has a mind of its own...lol.
That said. I really like the way you turned this one out...great! The first chorus is terrific....I wanted to hear it again yeah.
Turning the next chorus sing into a "Bridge"....was a susprise, but on second listen...that was terrific as well...love the harmonies and minor chords...the music composition takes a dive into a richer "sadness"
and then the ending is amazing to me. Almost like the Beatles would do...big susprise and a further sinking into...what?...time takes its toll.
Does sound like sheryl crow. wow...cool song! Bill Thanks Bill. Yeah it would be worlds better if you could edit the chords . And had more control It's almost as if it's giving you a commercial of your song. Here are some looks. It's very strange for me. As I said I'm going to do music my way, but I won't dismiss a tool that can point me in a direction I think the best results will come by using it to support you not you supporting it.
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This actually sounds great until it goes all weird. I really like the lyric too.
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This actually sounds great until it goes all weird. I really like the lyric too. Lol I know you get what you pay for I guess. Thanks
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