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Bad Plus
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/04/24 06:26 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/02/24 11:18 AM
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NONE
by JAPOV - 11/29/24 12:16 PM
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Ember
by Bill Draper - 11/27/24 05:23 PM
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I have composed a melody for this lyric by Carroll Kiphen. Rough recording: my voice + ukulele. https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223/one-kiss-at-a-time-ukeONE KISS AT A TIME ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ © Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2024. © Melody: Guy E. Trépanier, 2024. Intro: 4 bars (key of E) It took time to make an impression. Took a while to get a date. Got a lunch and then a movie. Couldn’t make it to first base. I knew I had to be patient. knew she’d been hurt before. I had to prove I was different. Show her she was adored. In time she would grow to love me. She’d see I was kind. I was gonna make her fall for me; one kiss at a time. She was slow to shed her suspicions. She’d heard some things about me. I made her and the kids some pizza. Slowly set her mind at ease. I knew I had to be patient. Knew she’d been hurt before. I had to prove I was different. Show her she was adored. In time she would grow to love me. She’d see I was kind. I was gonna make her fall for me; one kiss at a time. The first time was to say goodnight. The next one let her know. I didn’t want to be just friends. The third came with a rose. I knew I had to be patient. Knew she’d been hurt before. I had to prove I was different. Show her she was adored. In time she would grow to love me. She’d see I was kind. I was gonna make her fall for me; one kiss at a time. Yes, I made her fall in love with me one kiss at a time.
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Melody singing and lyric is very good. Needs another recording, of course. Very nice!
Bill
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Thank you Ray. Nice tune. Appreciate it.
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Hey Guy and Carroll. Can I do a cover of this and post it here?
I just bought a new Uke and want some practice recording real songs.
Bill
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Hey Guy and Carroll. Can I do a cover of this and post it here?
I just bought a new Uke and want some practice recording real songs.
Bill If you want to apply a new melody, that's okay for me. If you want to do a simple cover, here is a technical view of the song. ONE KISS AT A TIME ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++(3:06) tempo:112 © Lyrics: Carroll Kiphen, 2024. © Melody: Guy E. Trépanier, 2024. Intro: 4 bars (key of E) chords: I=E, 2m=F#m, V7=B7, IV=A (I)5__3_13/(2m)4__~~/(V7)5__4_27/(I)1__~~/ (I)It took time to make an /(2m)impression. / (1_5_1515/6_26_'~/) < verse (V7)Took a while to get a /(I)date. / (2_7_2724/3__~~/) (I)Got a lunch and then a /(2m)mo-ovie. / (1_5_1515/2_66_'~/) (V7)Couldn’t make it to first /(I)base. / (7_5_2727/1__~'~/) (2m)'I knew I had to be pa-/tient. / ('2262624/2__~~/) < Pre chorus (V7)Knew she’d been hurt be-/(I)fore. / (7_272_7_/3__~~/) (2m)'I had to prove I was diffe-/rent. / ('2262624/2__~~/) (V7)Show her she was a-/(I)dored. / (7_272_4_/3__~~/) (I)In time she would /(2m)grow to love me. / (5_3_5_3_/4_.54_2_/) < chorus (V7)_ She’d see I was /(I)kind./ (~2_4_24/3__~~/) (I)I was gonna make her /(2m)fall for me / (53135_3_/4_.54_~/) (V7)_ One kiss at a /(I)time. / (~2_5_42/1__~~/) (I)5__3_13/(2m)4__~~/(V7)5__4_27/(I)1__~~/ (I)She was slow to shed her /(2m)suspicions. / (1_5_1515/6_26_'~/) < verse (V7)She’d heard some things about /(I)me. / (2_7_2724/3__~~/) (I)I made her and the kids /(2m)some pizza. / (1_5_1515/2_66_'~/) (V7)Slowly set her mind at /(I)ease. / (7_5_2727/1__~'~/) Pre chorus chorus (IV)The first time was to /(I)say goodnight. / (1_6_1_61/3_1_3_~/) < bridge (IV)The next one let her /(I)know. / (1_6_1_61/3__~~/) (IV)I didn’t want to /(I)be just friends. / (1_661_6_/3_1_3_~/) (2m)The third came with a /(V7)rose. / (2_6_2_62/7__~~/) Pre chorus chorus (I)Yes, I made her fall in /(2m)love with me / (53135_3_/4_.54_~/) (V7)_ one kiss at a /(I)time. / (~2_5_42/1__~~/) _ /
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Really quite nice, Guy
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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Hey Guy,
Thanks. That's amazing. The numbers to the right are the melody note detail. I like the melody and your vocal which I will attempt to duplicate.
This is not going to be easy...but is why I will try. Catch you later.
Bill
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Hey Guy,
Thanks. That's amazing. The numbers to the right are the melody note detail. I like the melody and your vocal which I will attempt to duplicate.
This is not going to be easy...but is why I will try. Catch you later.
Bill Hey Guy and CK....I had some fun w this one. I decided to work with Guy's singing...I could not even come close to copy. So....I was able to pull the song into my Zoom R8....yeah. I experimented some with my Uke and bass...but final take....thought....just keep it simple. So...added some reverb to Guy's vocal, bumped a minimal bass, very light. And jangled my uke along w the song. But its Guy's vocal that is the best here. fun learning for me. Cheers. Bill https://soundcloud.com/user-3971669...ium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
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really great job you've done here Bill....really like the fullness of sound with the added Uke and bass..and Guy's voice just jumps off the page with the added reverb..very impressive
Steve
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Hooray! Thanks Steve.
Bill
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Hi Bill
I love it the way you have improved the song with your arrangement.
Thanks a lot!
I can imagine a full production with a singer like Michael Buble.
Have fun!
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Hi Bill
I love it the way you have improved the song with your arrangement.
Thanks a lot!
I can imagine a full production with a singer like Michael Buble.
Have fun! Guy You are too modest...I can see a full production with you being the singer Steve
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I agree nice overhaul, you can hear the strings and chords right there. Guy you have a good honest voice, my suggestion would be to work on the accents of words , dont stretch them into the song if they aren't supposed to be spoken that way...like accenting the wrong syllables.
It takes away from the honesty of your voice.
Bill nice job overhauling this. Id suggest working together more and expanding into different areas
Nice work all three of ya
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That's great Guy....glad you like it. It was quite enjoyable strumming along to your music and voice!
Thanks Fdem...this was a fun one for sure.
Bill
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Great team work guys , enjoyed it
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