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I just found this attached to an email. I guess I meant to send it to somebody dont think I ever did lol. Saved indraft.

But I wrote this solely because I had that boxed 50's pattern an ez keys when I was using it. I think this is where I developed a hatred for canned music.

But halfway decent song worth doing the real way,,?

Elevator Music
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14715214

Well, I was stuck in a box between two and three
When a song came on that was familiar to me
Heard that riff got me feeling alright
I said, go, Johnny B. Goode tonight

I love that elevator (elevator music)
It's a stimulator (elevator music)
A rejuvenater, (elevator music)
It keeps on elevating me

Now, it was getting hot great balls of fire
Good Golly Ms. Molly I was feelin inspired
Man called down, said "it won't be long"
I said Man "why'd you interrupt my song"

I love that elevator (elevator music)
You can save me later (elevator music)
My defibrillator (elevator music)
it keeps on elevating me

No, I'm not talkin bout the kind that goes go ding ding ding....
It's the kind that kicks your heels up
And gives you back your zing

I love that elevator (elevator music)
It's a stimulator (elevator music)
A rejuvenater, (elevator music)
It's keeps on elevating me

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The real way ? whatever that means . Yeah its cool boogey woogey , I'm impressed

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Originally Posted by bennash
The real way ? whatever that means . Yeah its cool boogey woogey , I'm impressed

Thanks man. Well the first verse refers to chuck, so I think id do a guitar version. Second verse refers to Jerry Lee, and little Richard, so works there.

With an Elvis vocal

Just would like it to be a modern twist on the classics... Amazing that stuff can be considered elevator music today

If I do it again I'd try to make it sound more modern instead of bingo night at the seniors home. That's the problem with boxed stuff

I wasn't alive when that stuff hit, but I guess I have the feel by listening to people inspired by them.

I think it could work on a movie or tv show

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Lyrics are fine , melody wise ? Yup maybe to lose the boogey woogey 50ties vibe, certainly do able to 2024 stuff , you have to research it

I’ve heard a few country songs they nod to old vibes , but freshen it up

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Originally Posted by bennash
Lyrics are fine , melody wise ? Yup maybe to lose the boogey woogey 50ties vibe, certainly do able to 2024 stuff , you have to research it

I’ve heard a few country songs they nod to old vibes , but freshen it up

It's a rock n roll melody, think I stole it from jail house rock


But yeah it's doable, just wondering if it's worth doing

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Man I don’t know , you know me I promote
Depends what you wanna get out of it
You could talk to my manager do what we’re doing on a small budget for laughs , who knows make a few bucks with some elbow grease

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Originally Posted by bennash
Man I don’t know , you know me I promote
Depends what you wanna get out of it
You could talk to my manager do what we’re doing on a small budget for laughs , who knows make a few bucks with some elbow grease

Lol nah I don't need a manager, they want 50% of what I make.

I don't think of music as a way to make money,. 1% make 99% of it

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Naw he's not that kind of manager like your thinking , More of a guidance counsler
Here , if you want to talk with him , tell em Ben sent ya

https://www.fiverr.com/brenobranche...;funnel=ee76aded16ad4ae7a09f83a2c503e99e

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Originally Posted by bennash
Naw he's not that kind of manager like your thinking , More of a guidance counsler
Here , if you want to talk with him , tell em Ben sent ya

https://www.fiverr.com/brenobranche...;funnel=ee76aded16ad4ae7a09f83a2c503e99e

Lmao, a fiverr manager

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Basically lol, Its to be heard , i'm not really into money , if we can sell cds down the road all good
you think i give a [naughty word removed] on this material world at 70 , not really

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Competing with Beatles, If you want to dance w me. and bob segers old time rock and roll. forget it.
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Mr Demetrio,
Really enjoyed the music. and the verses bringing back some nostalgia...cool.

but....el-e-vat-or isn't quite clicky enough enunciated for rockabilly feel...to me. And 'elevator' music is not being nice to your audience?

Otherwise sounds very good...I go with it if I were you.

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Originally Posted by Bill Draper
Mr Demetrio,
Really enjoyed the music. and the verses bringing back some nostalgia...cool.

but....el-e-vat-or isn't quite clicky enough enunciated for rockabilly feel...to me. And 'elevator' music is not being nice to your audience?

Otherwise sounds very good...I go with it if I were you.

Bill

Explain what rockabilly song is enunciated better, just so I know what the [naughty word removed] your talking about

Stray cats rock this town?

Your track record of songs doesnt jive with your sharp reviews.

Is this song worse than anything you have posted here?

I see a trail of crap

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Stray cats rock this town?

Yes thats what I was thinking....KK sound TTT sound ...bit into the quick beat

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Your track record of songs doesnt jive with your sharp reviews.

Correct. I am aware of this. I like to do song reviews, but know that I must put up my own crap as the price of admission.

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Originally Posted by Bill Draper
Your track record of songs doesnt jive with your sharp reviews.

Correct. I am aware of this. I like to do song reviews, but know that I must put up my own crap as the price of admission.

Bill

No, but it's like calling somebody ugly when you look like a barnuckle on a hairy ass cheek.

And I'm tired of people posting songs and disappearing.

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Agreed.

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Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
No, but it's like calling somebody ugly when you look like a barnuckle on a hairy ass cheek.

And I'm tired of people posting songs and disappearing.

Only YOU would know what "a barnuckle on a hairy ass cheek" looks like, Dom!

I wish you would just fuk'yourself to death, IDIOT!

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Oh another fight about songs , ha ha ha

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Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
I just found this attached to an email. I guess I meant to send it to somebody dont think I ever did lol. Saved indraft.

But I wrote this solely because I had that boxed 50's pattern an ez keys when I was using it. I think this is where I developed a hatred for canned music.

But halfway decent song worth doing the real way,,?

Elevator Music
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14715214

Well, I was stuck in a box between two and three
When a song came on that was familiar to me
Heard that riff got me feeling alright
I said, go, Johnny B. Goode tonight

I love that elevator (elevator music)
It's a stimulator (elevator music)
A rejuvenater, (elevator music)
It keeps on elevating me

Now, it was getting hot great balls of fire
Good Golly Ms. Molly I was feelin inspired
Man called down, said "it won't be long"
I said Man "why'd you interrupt my song"

I love that elevator (elevator music)
You can save me later (elevator music)
My defibrillator (elevator music)
it keeps on elevating me

No, I'm not talkin bout the kind that goes go ding ding ding....
It's the kind that kicks your heels up
And gives you back your zing

I love that elevator (elevator music)
It's a stimulator (elevator music)
A rejuvenater, (elevator music)
It's keeps on elevating me

Firstly, Dom...
Your premise here is that everyone must be just as shallow, lifeless, and miserable as you. Why would anyone be so tickled to literally be a captive audience, and be subjected to poorly produced Casio versions of classic rock songs? Anyone who actually recognizes the music is immediately reminded of a time before socialism corrupted the US Constitution, and good God fearing Christian morality was universally accepted as a necessary template for American unity. Then, of course, the bastardization of said songs are just a reminder of copyrights and greedy corporate bureaucracy. But, since the trapped patron is forced to listen, the screwed up music can't be unheard... Yet another reminder of progressive social engineering, and the ignorance of the current generation who believe "beats" have always sounded like'dat. So, why a song about elevator music...? Probably because you actually "aspire" to be an elevator star...

Secondly, God forbid...
If I were trapped in an elevator with nothing else to listen to, and you were just grinning and bouncing along to the music...
I would probably kill and eat you.

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Sounds like a rant Jelly Roll did in front of congress on drugs ha ha
Elevator star , would be a great hook Tony

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500 lbs and going up
Full of ideas I never shut up
Pants on the ground ain't gettin' me down
Plenty of room baby test your luck

I babble all day no matter who you are
Trapped in a box you won't get far
Hide your tears and cover your ears
It's my world I'm the elevator star...

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There ya go

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Originally Posted by bennash
There ya go

Roll wit'it! grin

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Originally Posted by JAPOV
500 lbs and going up
Full of ideas I never shut up
Pants on the ground ain't gettin' me down
Plenty of room baby test your luck

I babble all day no matter who you are
Trapped in a box you won't get far
Hide your tears and cover your ears
It's my world I'm the elevator star...

Sucks. If you'd work on your craft and learned how to write to an existing melody, you might adone ok

But like most of your stuff it's aimless, pointless, not at all humerous, and worst of all, not fitting my melody.
If you want to poke fun, why not do it correctly, but you don't have the chops.

Dude you suddenly act like your just a guy who likes to play songs. You really think you're good, and ive never seen you take a critique well.

Always a hint of sarcasm, or some unrelated retort.

* Japov I think the melody is weak in this section"

" Ahh duh, you folks have to stop accusing me of singing".

We get it you don't mind being told your singing is weak... But again coukd be worked on...


But don't say anything about my music...

The whole thing stinks. Work on stuff, learn your craft, listen to good writers.

Have something to say and stay clear of hal Lindsay

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What the [naughty word removed] is that?

I'm embarrassed to be insulted so lamely.

Say now let me grab my guitar, play the most cliche blues guitar in the history of music, ..mumble, and sing like im soooooo cool, and pass it off as a song?

This is one of the worst things you ever posted

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Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
soooooo cool

You're welcome grin

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Originally Posted by JAPOV
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
soooooo cool

You're welcome grin

I'm not sure you're aware of what you sound like.

It's kinda like this in all honesty

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14717725

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Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Originally Posted by JAPOV
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
soooooo cool

You're welcome grin

I'm not sure you're aware of what you sound like.

It's kinda like this in all honesty

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14717725

WAAAAH, HAHAHAHA, snort Haaaa haha... LMBFAO!!!

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Oliver and Hardy

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Laurel and Hardy? wink

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The song sounds pretty good to me. Well performed too, lots of energy. It's a bit derivative, but maybe that's the point.

There is no such thing as a barnuckle. The hairy ass cheek you mention might sport a carbuncle or, less likely unless it belongs to a whale, a barnacle. Hmm, where is a whale's ass?

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Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
Hmm, where is a whale's ass?

That's actually a good question...

Whales are classified as mammals. So, if a whale has no ass, where does it fit in the evolutionary scheme of things?

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Right them guys , Abbot and costello

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Originally Posted by JAPOV
Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
Hmm, where is a whale's ass?

That's actually a good question...

Whales are classified as mammals. So, if a whale has no ass, where does it fit in the evolutionary scheme of things?
In contrast to those of whales, horse's asses are pretty easy to spot, at least on this thread smile

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Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
Originally Posted by JAPOV
Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
Hmm, where is a whale's ass?

That's actually a good question...

Whales are classified as mammals. So, if a whale has no ass, where does it fit in the evolutionary scheme of things?
In contrast to those of whales, horse's asses are pretty easy to spot, at least on this thread smile

Well, no sense in being "half-assed" grin

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Ha Ha Ha
In contrast to those of whales, horse's asses are pretty easy to spot, at least on this thread

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Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
I just found this attached to an email. I guess I meant to send it to somebody dont think I ever did lol. Saved indraft.

But I wrote this solely because I had that boxed 50's pattern an ez keys when I was using it. I think this is where I developed a hatred for canned music.

But halfway decent song worth doing the real way,,?

Elevator Music
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14715214

Well, I was stuck in a box between two and three
When a song came on that was familiar to me
Heard that riff got me feeling alright
I said, go, Johnny B. Goode tonight

I love that elevator (elevator music)
It's a stimulator (elevator music)
A rejuvenater, (elevator music)
It keeps on elevating me

Now, it was getting hot great balls of fire
Good Golly Ms. Molly I was feelin inspired
Man called down, said "it won't be long"
I said Man "why'd you interrupt my song"

I love that elevator (elevator music)
You can save me later (elevator music)
My defibrillator (elevator music)
it keeps on elevating me

No, I'm not talkin bout the kind that goes go ding ding ding....
It's the kind that kicks your heels up
And gives you back your zing

I love that elevator (elevator music)
It's a stimulator (elevator music)
A rejuvenater, (elevator music)
It's keeps on elevating me

Firstly, Dom...
Your premise here is that everyone must be just as shallow, lifeless, and miserable as you. Why would anyone be so tickled to literally be a captive audience, and be subjected to poorly produced Casio versions of classic rock songs? Anyone who actually recognizes the music is immediately reminded of a time before socialism corrupted the US Constitution, and good God fearing Christian morality was universally accepted as a necessary template for American unity. Then, of course, the bastardization of said songs are just a reminder of copyrights and greedy corporate bureaucracy. But, since the trapped patron is forced to listen, the screwed up music can't be unheard... Yet another reminder of progressive social engineering, and the ignorance of the current generation who believe "beats" have always sounded like'dat. So, why a song about elevator music...? Probably because you actually "aspire" to be an elevator star...

Secondly, God forbid...
If I were trapped in an elevator with nothing else to listen to, and you were just grinning and bouncing along to the music...
I would probably kill and eat you.

At least this is song discussion, I didn't see it before.

Firstly, the point of the song is a hyperbolic one.

I recall one time being in an elevator and hearinng 50's music, and thinking this must be cast aside now as elevator music, but realizing as the guy in the song is too, how great that music was, is and the irony.

He's enjoying the music. It's not survivor on an island it's a guy stuck in an elevator help will be thee and not to be taken so serious

If it sounds like Casio I get it. I only wrote it cause I had the ez keys track.

I don't like the way it sounds as prefaced. Reading is fun n mental

and you can clearly tell it's done tongue and cheek and fun.

If you can't tell it's hyperbolic your, well you.

Point was was it worth redoing which I'll never get an honest Answer now.

So I'll just do it and pitch to movie or tv for an elevator scene

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Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
The song sounds pretty good to me. Well performed too, lots of energy. It's a bit derivative, but maybe that's the point.

There is no such thing as a barnuckle. The hairy ass cheek you mention might sport a carbuncle or, less likely unless it belongs to a whale, a barnacle. Hmm, where is a whale's ass?
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Back to song , it really doesn't matter... its all on a fan base on what they like

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Originally Posted by bennash
Back to song , it really doesn't matter... its all on a fan base on what they like

Yes and I'n this case the target audience is really youth. Making the case to younger crowd that this music may be old but it started it all.

That's why I think I need modem arrangement and sound

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Worth exploring

The bottom line is, in life, sometimes good things happen, sometimes bad things happen. But if you don’t take a chance, nothing happens.

Thankfully, dreams can change. If we'd all stuck with our first dream, the world would be overrun with cowboys and princesses.
If I worried about the glass half full all the time, I'd die of thirst

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Fde,

Well finally you posted a song.........Hurrah! Kinda of a "cover" with your own lyrics, but it was fun! Maybe Tony could give you a lead guitar track.........I think you two could work together quite well? Bring up your harmonies a little louder, I enjoyed your boogie-woogie. Vocals decent, maybe give the falsetto part a little more energy like Jerry Lee.

Good to see you post.........I should get off my butt and post something new, am working on a Country tune however, but haven't been in my studio much this past year as "real work" seems to get in my way along with other distractions.

Best,

steady-eddie

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Dom has shot me down one too many times... That collab ship has sailed. Not to mention all the others he has "heckled" over the years.

Besides, I'm now convinced he could easily make better productions on his own. So, he obviously has an ulterior motive for being here...


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