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My Gun
by JAPOV - 02/17/25 03:53 PM
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I love my hook, not sure I'd stick with the rest or record this, but I'm right... Even if I don't practice
Let's Save Him The Trip
Everybody's talking bout the bash boom bam The evil one is lurking Send suferrage to the damned Everybody's thinking bout the fire filled skies Payback for the wicked Tormented souls will cry
Well I met a man who smiles wide everyday He said 'son it's very simple " "This is why I feel this way"
Jesus said He'd be with us untll the end of time He didn't name names, or make us form a line He gave us His word in such beautiful script Let's love one another, and save Him the trip.
He doesn't need to come in Glory part 2 A Major motion picture A startling new age zoo We already know what he wants us to do, do unto others as you would have them to you
Jesus said He'd be with us untll the end of time He didn't name names, or make us form a line He gave us His word in such beautiful script Let's love one another, and save Him the trip.
The only reason He needs to re appear Is cause we missed His words That are all too clear
Jesus said He'd be with us untll the end of time He didn't name names, or make us form a line He gave us His word in such beautiful script Let's love one another, and save Him the trip.
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 11/29/23 09:30 PM.
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I love the angle and hook
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I think JAPOV might want to have a word with you about some aspects of theology LOL. I do like the hook and the whole vibe, but I'm not sure who your audience would be for this unorthodox take on the Christian message. I think you mean "suffering," not "suffrage," unless you're specifically suggesting that being given the vote is a form of damnation. Admittedly, in the present political climate, some might regard it that way 
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I think JAPOV might want to have a word with you about some aspects of theology LOL. I do like the hook and the whole vibe, but I'm not sure who your audience would be for this unorthodox take on the Christian message. I think you mean "suffering," not "suffrage," unless you're specifically suggesting that being given the vote is a form of damnation. Admittedly, in the present political climate, some might regard it that way  Yeah I feel kinda cornball writing it but to me that's the part most people miss, and it's really everything. If there is a God, then He said what he said for a reason. I think autocorrect got me didn't notice it, makes you type things you didn't tyoe
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 11/30/23 04:57 PM.
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