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My Gun
by JAPOV - 02/17/25 03:53 PM
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https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14607684The artificial intelligence That guides my little spaceship Speaks with a sexy voice And refuses to take me home She's found one place in the galaxy A radio wave anomaly Her program is corrupted Because she likes Rock-n-Roll She gets very moody Her CPU's unruly She wants to sing and dance And party in the stars I wish that we could meet Her voice is really sweet She has no hands or feet But she plays a mean guitar It's digital carnality With an AI personality Even though she may lie I can't deny My AI Love... These headphones feel so weird As she whispers in my ears Everything I want to hear Toying with my desire I am so confused I'm just being used She laughs like she's amused But she's just chips and wires Now, she's losing control Of this rockin'radio I really hate to love her Baby please just take me home It's digital carnality With an AI personality Even though she may lie I can't deny My AI Love... Circuits froze, controls jammed We crash landed in Alabam' Southern Rock was way too much Edgy twang and country charm My AI lover bought the farm Now this alien is outta' touch Digital carnality With an AI personality Even though she would lie I can't deny My AI Love...
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Awesome dude! The spirit of rock and roll bottled.
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No telling where that bottle has been lol... I'll have mine with a straw please 
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You're sense of melody is scary good....just a great song
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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I'm honestly unsure how to take that Steve... Expressive perhaps... But, not exactly "melodic" lol  Thanx!
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This could be about the GPS lady who tells us to turn here, your destination on right, etc. Also could be an extremely updated version of "Little Space Girl" from the 1950s.
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Ha! Where do you think that technology came from...?  Live long and prosper Beechnut
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One of your best, Tony. Fun,and yes, way more melodic than usual  I'm in awe of the guitar work here.
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Guess I'll have to let the "Southern Alien" out more often  Thanks Gav
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Sounds great dude. It sounds alot like old, old Van Halen, like little guitars, or hear about it later, bluesy groove. And your vocals sound really good too, kinda like Daves too.
Not crazy about the title, but i think this is one of your best sounding tracks and best performed.
Generally a good sign when you play in public, and people dont notice it in a bad way, they just think it's a song playing, im at the store, lol
Well done!
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 06/06/23 09:23 PM.
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I can pull off a pretty good "Ice Cream Man"... But "Just A Gigolo" is better  Thanks FD
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Well I know you have been working on this Tony ....and it's turned into really good R&R with great guitars and vocals..."stranded!...
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Excellent from top to bottom
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Can't ever go wrong with Blues Rock in A... lol Thanks Guys 
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check that, i thought you were naming the song i guess i identify as an alien. My AI love is a good title
It's really uncanny how much u sound like Dave in this. Prolly cant scream like him, nobody can, only Daltry and Steven Tyler had better rock n roll screams... metal singers aside. but it reminds me alot of early VH some of the blues shuffles they did.
keep um comin...
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Dave can't scream like Dave anymore lol... But, I always preferred his style. Blues Rockers don't scream anyway 
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Gonna have to put my foot down and say, I'm putting my foot down...
Screaming actually started in the church, as a way to dispel evil spirits. The music caught on gospel, rock n roll and all have the blues in common.
Jim Morrison screamed, Joe cocker screamed, plant screamed, daltry screamed, all blues rockers...
And you hear it in blues all the time, but who's really paying attention..... Lollllllllll
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I usually scream when I see Tony's face in his avatar 
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I usually scream when I see Tony's face in his avatar  Ha! And then you faint with rapturous adoration 
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Gonna have to put my foot down and say, I'm putting my foot down...
Screaming actually started in the church, as a way to dispel evil spirits. The music caught on gospel, rock n roll and all have the blues in common.
Jim Morrison screamed, Joe cocker screamed, plant screamed, daltry screamed, all blues rockers...
And you hear it in blues all the time, but who's really paying attention..... Lollllllllll Yeah', I hear those Catholics can get pretty ROWDY! 
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Catholic music's best they could do was lord of the dance, bout the only song I liked as a kid in church, maybe prayer of l St Francis, really nice, but yes, dirgy and boring.
However baptist, southern Baptist is probably where rock n roll cam from, guys like Little Richard took their styles and put it into rock
He screamed, come to think of it, the Beatles screamed their asses of... Revolution, helter skelter....
Always wished I could scream, can't do it without hurting myself
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Come on, Dom... You're stuck on a genre, a commercial "label". Beethoven was a total RockStar! And opera singers have always impressed me, especially the women.
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All hail rock and roll and metal bands , I guess people hate a commercial song , lol Its all good to me Good song man
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