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Bad Plus
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/28/23 09:27 PM
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Future Me
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/28/23 08:28 AM
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Dzidzor
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/28/23 07:36 AM
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Copyright
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/27/23 06:19 AM
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Catalaya
by John Voorpostel - 05/26/23 08:02 PM
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Simple beat and melody here, not too overdone, almost "reggae"... I like it. Great place to start. Got your message, and yes, I enjoy a little midi "beat making" now and then lol  You usually have lyrics though,; Can you sing along with this melody? You see, sometimes the lyrics indicate where changes in the music should be. Tony
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It's a fun listen.......lots to like. The "melody" here would be a hard one to sing, as is, however.
But as for just listening, as is............I like it!
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You usually have lyrics though,; Can you sing along with this melody? You see, sometimes the lyrics indicate where changes in the music should be.
Tony Hi Japov, Thanks for the reply. I have no lyrics for this song as yet but the lyric idea and story line I have in my imagination is as follow: Two people have a fight in front of one of their houses ( As I demonstrated in the intro, broken glasses) after the fight the one who owns the house says to the one who he had just beaten up on "Come in fuh more" meaning come into my house to be beaten up some more.
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Lol... Well, I've always said "Take inspiration wherever you can find it".
Here's an idea...
Then she said...
If my smile brought you to my door
Come on in for more
You could also change that every time it repeats.
smile, eyes, legs, lips, curves, etc...
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My baby says, you just like my legs The way I walk, the way I talk I'm always turning heads Then she said... If my legs brought you to my door Come on in for more And so on...
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Could also switch back and forth between male/female vox...
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THEN... they can fight! Lol 
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Lol, Hi hi hi. You're onto something there.
Well, I was thinking of action movie style from the beginning. You know action movie's draw the crowd.
You are thinking of a love song kinda, am I right?.
If so, I do like the idea that can get a lot of attention too.
Now you get me thinking.
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Uh-Oh! Roll with it bro
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JAPOV, I am getting a good vibe to creating the lyric as in "If my smile brought you to my door, Come on in for more or (Come in foh more)
This could be an interesting lyric that can lead to a great song. I am serious.
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Irwin,
this sounds like something that would work really well on a travel show segment, maybe trekking from one place to another via caravan with lots of B roll footage.
The intro was a bit odd, I was not expecting the music to sound like it did after that.
interesting.
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Irwin,
this sounds like something that would work really well on a travel show segment, maybe trekking from one place to another via caravan with lots of B roll footage. Yes Maccharles, I am hearing that kinda vibe too but wasn't my first intention though. Thanks for the reply. Irwin
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It's a fun listen.......lots to like. The "melody" here would be a hard one to sing, as is, however.
But as for just listening, as is............I like it! Thanks for listening IronKnee, I appreciate the comment and am glad you like my song. Irwin
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