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Bad Plus
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/28/23 09:27 PM
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Future Me
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/28/23 08:28 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/28/23 07:36 AM
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Copyright
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/27/23 06:19 AM
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Catalaya
by John Voorpostel - 05/26/23 08:02 PM
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Curiously Witty Irises There’s an edge to full redemption Little nudges take me there In a garden full of Edens How can such a thing be fair When Curiously witty irises Shout from ordered terraces Gracing every day with flowering words Mostly they just show I am In that they’re just like any man Though exceptional as coloured connoisseurs We all jockey for position Don’t need a reason just a ruse What’s the worst thing that can happen Everyone gets an excuse And then The bottom totally drops out of things No one’s thinking about terracing Lot of shouting out a lot of words Sometimes there’s more show than tell Push and shove on a carousel See them go those jousting connoisseurs Can you answer in a way I can't explain What matters more than Eden in the rain? I think I had her full attention Iris anthers bursting tall In a garden full of Edens It wouldn’t matter at all Until Graciously coloured she accepts Me well adorned with manners Think she hears my every spoken word I think I say it like it is I love the way you look and live Argent lemon violet connoisseur This is a very interesting lyric John Voorpostel sent me... With instructions to do anything I wanted to with... So, I did  https://soundclick.com/r/s8nxc6Curious Witty Irises There’s an edge to full redemption Little nudges take me there In a garden full of Edens How can such a thing be fair When Curious witty irises Shout from ordered terraces Gracing every day with flowering words Mostly they can show I am Just like any other man Though exceptional as colored connoisseurs We all wrestle for position Don’t need a reason just a ruse What’s the worst that could happen Everyone gets an excuse Then The bottom totally drops out What's everybody thinking about Lots of shouting and lots of words Push and shove on a carousel Hate would rather show than tell See them go those jousting connoisseurs Can you answer in a way that I can't explain What matters more than Eden in the rain I think I had her full attention Iris anthers bursting tall In a garden full of Edens But it didn't matter at all No A slithering enchanter Well adorned with manners Blocked out the sun with just one word Winter in paradise Was it worth the sacrifice Fickle lemon violet connoisseur ***WARNING*** There's a "Generic Advertisement" right after this... Those of you with no sense of humor may want to skip it... 
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Thank you for taking this on Tony My style and yours are very different...so it is a pleasure when someone else puts my lyric to music. Even the different ending worked though I think anthers was an awesome rhyme
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