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This one is sort of a praise and worship song. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks for looking.

Heartstrings
©2022 Wayne Webb

A harmony is in your holy Words

Sweetest poetry I’ve ever heard

As I realize what they are saying

This is when you come to me

Suddenly you’re playing



Chorus

On my heartstrings

A lovely tune

Lord, I don’t need anything

When I can’t get enough of you

And when I feel this way

All I want to do

Is make the sweetest melody

And play it on my heartstrings

For you


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When I’m sad and think about you, Jesus

Knowing you’re, not far from any of us

That you’ll never take your Spirit from me

This is when you comfort me

Once again you’re strumming

Chorus


John 5:24 Verily, verily, I say unto you, He that heareth my word, and believeth on him that sent me, hath everlasting life, and shall not come into condemnation; but is passed from death unto life.
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I very much like what you have done here ... the opening line is soooo good... I'm impressed with your first post...keep going

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Thank you, Steve


John 5:24 Verily, verily, I say unto you, He that heareth my word, and believeth on him that sent me, hath everlasting life, and shall not come into condemnation; but is passed from death unto life.
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Originally Posted by John524
Thank you, Steve

John, I hope you will come back ad continue to post!

Brian


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Thank you, Brian!


John 5:24 Verily, verily, I say unto you, He that heareth my word, and believeth on him that sent me, hath everlasting life, and shall not come into condemnation; but is passed from death unto life.
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Hello and Welcome to JPF, John. If I may? [These suggestions are only that, suggestions. Keep or Sweep. I do like what you have here and believe that you do have something to build on. A good solid message within. Thanks for sharing.

Heartstrings
©2022 Wayne Webb

Harmony is in your holy Word
Sweetest poetry I’ve ever heard
As I realize what You're saying.
Suddenly You’re playing.

[C]

On my heartstrings. A lovely tune
Lord, I don’t need anything when I'm with you.
And when I feel down or when I am blue.
I let You in. That's what I do.
And play my heartstrings for you

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When I’m lonely I think of Your son.
Knowing you’re both there makes us all one.
Knowing your there and always near.
Gives me comfort and I hear
the strumming that follows me now. [Chorus]


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I second what Douglas posted. The flow seems much better and I really like the opening line.


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killer opening line , Id look at replacing blue in chorus , Christian music has killer melodies at least the ones I've heard


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