Who's Online Now
7 members (bennash, rpirone, Gary E. Andrews, JAPOV, Sunset Poet, Guy E. Trepanier, 1 invisible), 917 guests, and 254 robots.
Key: Admin, Global Mod, Mod
Register Today!
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.

By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
ShoutChat
Comment Guidelines: Do post respectful and insightful comments. Don't flame, hate, spam.
What's Going On
Rose Mountain Ramblers, Portsmouth, Ohio
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/18/24 11:10 PM
The Rant Arena
by JAPOV - 03/18/24 10:59 PM
Inspirational Videos Post Them Here
by Sunset Poet - 03/18/24 07:39 PM
Wake Sessions
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/18/24 02:09 PM
All You Are Is A Lie
by Sunset Poet - 03/18/24 09:24 AM
New Digital Album
by John Lawrence Schick - 03/17/24 07:39 PM
NYC Motel 1972
by bennash - 03/17/24 02:18 PM
What now?-Got the demo done what do I do next?
by bennash - 03/17/24 10:50 AM
The Wolves Of Fading
by bennash - 03/17/24 10:36 AM
Crow Part 2
by bennash - 03/16/24 07:36 AM
Album release
by Ken Randall - 03/16/24 04:34 AM
Highly effective country boy
by bennash - 03/15/24 11:40 PM
Jimmy B 3 at Jerry's West Sports Bar & Pizza
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/15/24 02:02 PM
OPEN MIC/Karaoke Party! Come jam with us!
by David Gill - 03/14/24 08:45 AM
Winston's OB, Ocean Beach
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/13/24 09:15 AM
Sugarbeats Duo, Louisa, KY.
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/12/24 03:25 PM
Surging Motion, Batavia, NY
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/12/24 01:03 PM
St. Patrick's Day Song Challenge!
by David Gill - 03/12/24 10:37 AM
Ecstatic Dance OKC
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/11/24 12:56 AM
Michigan Fingerstyle Guitar Society
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/10/24 01:39 PM
Bridge The Divide
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/10/24 12:10 AM
Sincerity
by JAPOV - 03/09/24 07:54 PM
Bill Draper post repeat
by Bill Draper - 03/07/24 02:49 PM
Stuck Here At The Light
by Bill Draper - 03/06/24 01:24 PM
Laura K. Balke
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/06/24 07:31 AM
Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/04/24 12:47 PM
4 Artists
by bennash - 03/04/24 10:06 AM
House Fire, Portsmouth, Ohio
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/03/24 11:19 PM
Life is Good
by Ken Randall - 03/03/24 09:36 PM
Top Posters
Calvin 19,857
Travis david 12,264
Kevin Emmrich 10,941
Jean Bullock 10,330
Kaley Willow 10,240
Two Singers 9,649
Joice Marie 9,186
Mackie H. 9,003
glynda 8,683
Mike Dunbar 8,574
Tricia Baker 8,318
couchgrouch 8,159
Colin Ward 7,911
Corey 7,357
Vicarn 6,916
Mark Kaufman 6,589
ben willis 6,114
Lynn Orloff 5,788
Louis 5,725
Linda Sings 5,608
KimberlyinNC 5,210
Fdemetrio 4,979
Neil Cotton 4,909
Derek Hines 4,893
DonnaMarilyn 4,670
Blake Hill 4,528
Bob Cushing 4,389
Roy Cooper 4,271
Bill Osofsky 4,199
Tom Shea 4,195
Cindy Miller 4,178
TamsNumber4 4,171
MFB III 4,143
Sunset Poet 4,117
nightengale 4,096
E Swartz 3,985
JAPOV 3,960
beechnut79 3,878
Caroline 3,865
Kolstad 3,845
Dan Sullivan 3,710
Dottie 3,427
joewatt 3,411
Bill Cooper 3,279
John Hoffman 3,199
Skip Johnson 3,027
Pam Hurley 3,007
Terry G 3,005
Nigel Quin 2,891
PopTodd 2,890
Harriet Ames 2,870
MidniteBob 2,761
Nelson 2,616
Tom Tracy 2,558
Jerry Jakala 2,524
Al Alvarez 2,499
Eric Thome 2,448
Hummingbird 2,401
Stan Loh 2,263
Sam Wilson 2,246
Wendy D 2,235
Judy Hollier 2,232
Erica Ellis 2,202
maccharles 2,134
TrumanCoyote 2,096
Marty Helly 2,041
DukeWill 2,002
floyd jane 1,985
Clint Anglin 1,904
cindyrella 1,888
David Wright 1,866
Clairejeanne 1,851
Cindy LaRosa 1,824
Ronald Boyt 1,675
Iggy 1,652
Noel Downs 1,633
Rick Heenan 1,608
Cal 1,574
GocartMoz 1,559
Jack Swain 1,554
Pete Larsen 1,537
Ann Tygart 1,529
Tom Breshers 1,487
RogerS 1,481
Tom Franz 1,473
Chuck Crowe 1,441
Ralph Blight 1,440
Rick Norton 1,429
Kenneth Cade 1,429
bholt 1,411
Letha Allen 1,409
in2piano 1,404
Stan Simons 1,402
Deej56 1,385
mattbanx 1,384
Jen Shaner 1,373
Charlie Wong 1,347
KevinP 1,324
Vondelle 1,316
Tom W. 1,313
Jan Petter 1,301
scottandrew 1,294
lane1777 1,280
Gerry 1,280
DakLander 1,265
IronKnee 1,262
PeteG 1,242
Ian Ferrin 1,235
Glen King 1,214
IdeaGuy 1,209
VNORTH2 1,208
AaronAuthier 1,177
summeoyo 1,174
Diane Ewing 1,162
ckiphen 1,108
joro 1,082
BobbyJoe 1,075
S.DEE 1,040
yann 1,037
9ne 1,035
David Gill 1,021
Tony A 1,016
argo 986
peaden 984
90 dB 964
Wolvman 960
Jak Kelly 912
krtinberg 890
Drifter 886
Petra 883
RJC 845
Brenda152 840
Nadia 829
ant 798
Juan 797
TKO 784
Dayson 781
frahmes 781
teletwang 762
bennash 758
Andy K 750
Andy Kemp 749
tbryson 737
Jackie444 731
Irwin 720
3daveyO3 704
Dixie 701
Joy Boy 695
Pat Hardy 692
Knute 686
Lee Arten 678
Moosesong 668
Katziis 652
R.T.MOORE 638
quality 637
CG King 622
douglas 621
R&M 614
Mel 614
NaomiSue 601
Shandy 590
Ria 587
TAMERA64 583
qbaum 570
nitepiano 566
pRISCILLA 556
Tink2 553
musica 539
deanbell 528
RobertK 527
BonzaiWag 523
Roderic 522
BB Wilbur 513
goodfolks 499
Zeek 487
Stu 486
Steve P. 481
KathyW 462
allenb 459
MaxG 458
Philjo 454
fanito 448
trush48 448
dmk 442
Rob L 439
arealrush 437
DGR 436
avweek 435
Stephen D 433
Emmy 431
marquez 422
kit 419
Softkrome 417
kyrksongs 415
RRon 408
Laura G. 407
VNORTH 407
Debra 407
eb 406
cuebald 399
EdPerrone 399
Dannyk1 395
Hobart 395
Davyboy49 393
Smile 389
GJShades 387
Alek 386
Ezt 384
tone 380
Marla 380
Ann_F 379
iggyiggy 378
coalminer 377
java 374
ddreuter 371
spidey 371
sweetsong 370
danny 367
Rob B. 360
Jim Ryan 360
papaG 353
Z - man 350
JamesDF5 348
John K 348
Jaden 344
TheBaz 340
Steggy 339
leif 339
tonedeaf 336
rickwork 334
Eddie Ray 332
Johnboy 328
Bob Lever 328
Helicon1 327
lucian 326
Muskie 321
kc 319
Z. Mulls 318
ptondreau 313
ONOFFON 312
Chris B. 310
trush 304
ed323 297
Ellen M 294
markus-ky 293
lizzorn 291
nicnac49 290
Char 286
ktunes 285
Top Likes Received
JAPOV 85
VNORTH2 44
bennash 38
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
Rate Thread
#1180436 08/01/22 04:51 PM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
A bit of a social commentary on love in the modern world. I would have preferred to call it Modern Love, but that Bowie fella kind of made that title his own. I know lots of songs share titles, but when it's that well known, it would be a bit like writing a song and calling it Hey Jude smile

Verse 2 is a wee bit rude. I think it comes across as playful rather than offensive, but I do have an alternative version, which I've placed at the end of the lyric.


All suggestions and comments much appreciated, as always.

SoundCloud Link
https://soundcloud.com/themysteriousbeings/modern-lovers



MODERN LOVERS

Meet Martin, his friends are very few
Living with his mother at the age of forty-two
But after dinner, upstairs in his room
He talks to Geraldine for hours over Zoom
He’s a modern lover, and he’s on the Internet
With a lady in New Zealand that he hasn’t met yet
She’s just having breakfast, it’s the end of his day
In fact, it's past his bedtime, what would his mother say?
It’s modern love!
It’s modern love.

This is Larry and he’s something of a loner
Got some pills off the Internet that guarantee a boner
She’ll phone when she’s alone and
He’ll be smiling when she says,
"So Larry, what you up to these days?"
He’s a modern lover and he’s ready to connect
To Connie in Connecticut as soon as he’s erect
They’re finding love, 90 miles apart
And we’d better leave it there because the fun’s about to start.
It’s modern love!
It’s modern love.

This is Madge, she’s one hell of a catch
If you believe the picture at her profile up on Match
When she’s finished with the ironing, exactly at eight
She takes her phone up to her bedroom, ‘cause Madge has a date
She’s a modern lover, doesn’t play by the book
You’ll never reel him in without that bait on your hook
And no, he won’t have a seizure when he sees her
She’s pretty sure that picture isn’t really him either
Modern love!
It’s modern love.

Guitar solo

Danny’s friend Dinah, that he met online
It seems that he’s a trucker from South Carolina
But he’s actually quite cute, and Danny doesn’t mind.
The way he sees it, you take her as you find her,
Modern love!
It’s modern love.

This is Billy, and he's feeling rather silly
For sending all the ladies a picture of his willy
But everybody’s doing it, or so he understands
And you’ll never find romance without an iPhone down your pants
He’s a modern lover but he’s pining for the time
When you brought a lady flowers and took her out to dine
One evening in the produce aisle he checks out Caroline
And together they check out a bottle of wine
It's modern love!
It’s modern love.


Here's the slightly toned down version of the second verse, relying more on innuendo because some listeners might be put off by some of the words which don't usually find their way into popular music. I think I prefer the original straightforward version to this one, but would be interested in what others think.

Phil’s little pill gives him brand new superpowers
He’ll seek medical assistance if they last more than four hours
She’ll phone when she’s alone and
He’ll be smiling when she says
"So Phil. what’s up with you these days?"
He’s a modern lover and he’s ready to connect
To Alanna from Atlanta when the tablets take effect
They’re finding love, five hundred miles apart
And we’d better leave it there because the fun’s about to start.
It’s modern love!
It’s modern love.

Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 3,985
Likes: 22
Top 100 Poster
Offline
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Nov 2011
Posts: 3,985
Likes: 22
Hey Gavin,

This was a fun song to listen to--perhaps many will surely relate to the internet love game and others will enjoy. I think the song has a humorous yet realistic approach to online dating that will keep the listener's riveted--melody works well with this tune as well. Clever lyrics!

As far as the 2nd vs--my thoughts are if you were to pitch this is that the original verse would of course be funnier and maybe more direct to the point, but I think it may after several listens start to lose its original humor and begin to lose the original unexpected humor and gradually become considered a bit crude--thus I think your 2nd version will get the same message across without losing it's longer term humor and also be less disconcerting in keeping a listener's full attention -- Ex: In a live stage show when a line gets a big laugh, the characters on stage wait till the laugh dies down a bit before continuing their upcoming dialogue so that it doesn't get lost in the scene etc.-- you can't do that with a song however.

Maybe I'm wrong and its not a big deal, I do surely think its funny, but longer term, the more bland version may 'stay' funny and appeal to a wider group--but you follow your own instincts, as a songwriter, its cool to be brave as well!

steady-eddie

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
B O N E R ! In a SONG!
LMFAO.... I love BONER! I say BONER stays!
BONER BONER BONER BONER smile

E Swartz #1180478 08/03/22 11:57 AM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Thanks for the detailed answer, Eddie. It's nice when someone actually reads a specific question and responds to it rather than just saying it's great or it stinks LOL. I think you make some good points and I'll consider them as well as any other feedback I get. Thanks again!

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
("""Here's the slightly toned down version of the second verse, relying more on innuendo because some listeners might be put off by some of the words which don't usually find their way into popular music.""")

Let's make "BONER" popular! smile

Joined: May 2001
Posts: 5,581
Top 50 Poster
Offline
Top 50 Poster
Joined: May 2001
Posts: 5,581
"She’s a modern lover, doesn’t play by the book
You’ll never reel him in without that bait on your hook
And no, he won’t have a seizure when he sees her
She’s pretty sure that picture isn’t really him either"

That's priceless, Gavin. A fun little romp. One observation as a listener and of course that's totally subjective. There are a lot of verses and they are all strong lyrically but it started to lose some of the comedic effect for me after awhile as a result with the only break in the action being the brief solo.

It seems to my ear that one of two possibilities would strengthen it in that regard. And I'm only going to spend this much time in details cause frankly, the song and your tongue in cheek delivery kind of remind me of...well...ME!!! Okay, okay, so I liked it on its own merits. There. Are ya happy?

So...The observations...

1) Cut a few verses. I know it's hard when they all have their own individual charm but to strengthen the whole work it might be prudent.

2) And this might be preferrable of the two. Keep the solo and maybe even add a little turnaround or something completely abrupt and out of the ordinary musically just for a second...something perhaps just a bit quirky musically (just enough to raise an ear but not be distracting) with the briefest of pauses just to throw the listener off the scent..and then jump right back in just as abruptly with the chorus, "Modern Love" and continue on with the remaining verses. Another option would be to take one of the more humorous verses and make it into a bridge. You'll break the monotony a second time while maybe even giving those lines a brighter spotlight as a highlight...and then go for the finish in a last verse.

Lots of words, I know. I'm to the point of not making suggestions with an eye on "pitching the song" anymore. I think a more impactful input from me is simply, did I like it or not and why. That's what the audience we all seek is listening for. They're not record company execs. They are not going to try to pick the pepper out of the fly droppings through a magnifying glass either. Did it or didn't it move them in some way emotionally.

In this case suggestions are for the purpose of simply making it more impactful in its whimsy and comedic element....or not. Why? Because it moved me on an emotional level. It was lighthearted and made me grin a lot through the journey. I feel it time well spent.

Regards,
Steve


I'm the only person here who is not unique.
Joined: May 2001
Posts: 5,581
Top 50 Poster
Offline
Top 50 Poster
Joined: May 2001
Posts: 5,581
By the way, Gavin. I find I prefer the more subtle version of the second verse, especially because of the understated comedic delivery. Onstage I can imagine the response of the audience as you totally deadpan the delivery on..

"Phil’s little pill gives him brand new superpowers
He’ll seek medical assistance if they last more than four hours"

Your call, of course but I think the more subtle approach would get a better reaction.

Oh, something else I want to address. I've only been on here I think twice in the last 5+ years. I survived a very long and lifethreatening illkness and after a few months when I could somewhat type again I came on to address what someone else had written on my behalf and the nice comments to that.

I remember you pointing out we were next door neighbors buit at the time and for a long timer after Iwas pretty much an island unto myself.

I couldn't physically play an instrument and my voice was pretty much destroyed by 7 weeks on a mechanical ventilaor and 5 months with a trach. Honestly I lost all interest in makig music for the most part so there was no reason in my mind for hanging around songwriters and producers, etc. I didn't mean to be rude.

Truth is, after finding the site was back up I hoped you would find out and show up so I could respectfully introduce myself. If you would be interested I'd certainly be up for an introductory get together sometime. I see you're in Conover. We're actually just a little behind the Hickory airport.

Just wanted to address that as well, Sir.

Steve B.


I'm the only person here who is not unique.
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Thanks for the detailed comments, Steve. Some interesting ideas to think about and I'll definitely do that.

So that's two votes for the subtle version and JAPOV adamant in his support of the boner so far.

I'm glad you are feeling better. I'm up for a get together. Maybe somewhere in beautiful downtown Hickory? I'll PM you.

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Nothing is more optimistic than a big fat manly "BONER"! smile

JAPOV #1180578 08/06/22 10:06 AM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by JAPOV
Nothing is more optimistic than a big fat manly "BONER"! smile
I see your point there smile

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Right! Especially if it identifies as an 18yo blonde female cheerleader wink

Joined: Dec 2000
Posts: 11,532
Likes: 28
Top 10 Poster
Offline
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Dec 2000
Posts: 11,532
Likes: 28
Scads of fun Gavin.

I too like the more subtle approach so, sorry Tony, but you are on your own here

Like Steve's commentary too...makes some good points if you want to experiment some


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Fine, I'll just keep it to myself then... lol wink

JAPOV #1180741 08/17/22 09:37 AM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by JAPOV
Fine, I'll just keep it to myself then... lol wink

Not an image I care to dwell on lol.

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Ha! I know that's right! The women in the ladies room at Walmart hate it when I go in there... I may "feel" like a woman, but I still pee in the sink smile

JAPOV #1180806 08/19/22 05:43 PM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by JAPOV
Ha! I know that's right! The women in the ladies room at Walmart hate it when I go in there... I may "feel" like a woman, but I still pee in the sink smile
You think you're Shania Twain? It's not the peeing in the sink that upsets the ladies but the way you murder that song while you're doing so.

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Would be funny if that were true lol... I usually sing "Fat Bottom Girls" wink

Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 4,143
Likes: 6
Top 100 Poster
Offline
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 4,143
Likes: 6
Wow You nailed it, all of the actually anti social anti physical, long distance, electronic love that goes on. I am so glad that i grew up when I did. Well done Gavin.

Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by John Voorpostel
Scads of fun Gavin.

I too like the more subtle approach so, sorry Tony, but you are on your own here

Like Steve's commentary too...makes some good points if you want to experiment some
Thanks John. Another vote against Tony's boner. My huge listening audience seems to be coming down firmly on the side of a slightly more subtle approach.

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Ha! Yeah', OK... I'll own it! smile

"huge"..."coming"..."firmly"... Lol

Last edited by JAPOV; 08/21/22 06:46 AM.
Joined: Mar 2009
Posts: 2,134
Likes: 10
Top 200 Poster
Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: Mar 2009
Posts: 2,134
Likes: 10
Went to listen to this and got an ad instead, had to shut it down immediately......ugh.

Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by maccharles
Went to listen to this and got an ad instead, had to shut it down immediately......ugh.
Yes, that can be annoying. Soundcloud has gone to displaying the occasional ad unless you're a PRO subscriber. That's the first time I've heard of one popping up immediately when you click on a link. I've only noticed it between songs before. At least it spared you having to listen to me sing LOL.

Joined: Nov 2010
Posts: 6,916
Likes: 9
Top 40 Poster
Offline
Top 40 Poster
Joined: Nov 2010
Posts: 6,916
Likes: 9
You're good at those comic lyrics Gavin.
Made me chuckle.
Music sounds a little straight out of the box though. That'd be worth working on. Maybe a touch of the subdued Calvin sound?

Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

MFB III #1180872 08/23/22 10:31 AM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by MFB III
Wow You nailed it, all of the actually anti social anti physical, long distance, electronic love that goes on. I am so glad that i grew up when I did. Well done Gavin.
Thanks Matt. I didn't really set out to nail anything, just have a bit of fun with the characters in the song, but it did kind of turn into a bit of a critique of the very things I find funny about their situations smile

Vicarn #1180932 08/26/22 04:03 PM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by Vicarn
You're good at those comic lyrics Gavin.
Made me chuckle.
Music sounds a little straight out of the box though. That'd be worth working on. Maybe a touch of the subdued Calvin sound?

Vic
Thanks Vic. Glad to have brought about a chuckle. I was chuckling as I wrote it.

I don't think I could channel Calvin - he's pretty unique smile Also, not sure that it would work with this particular song. What I wanted was a straightforward up-tempo boppy feel. I get what you are saying with "a little straight out of the box," of course LOL.

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84

Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
No, Tony, it doesn't matter how nicely you ask. I'm not playing with your ding-a-ling.

Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
Top 100 Poster
Online Happy
Top 100 Poster
Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 3,960
Likes: 84
OMG! I certainly stepped in THAT one... O_O

Joined: Jul 2011
Posts: 1,262
Likes: 19
Top 200 Poster
Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: Jul 2011
Posts: 1,262
Likes: 19
Hi Gavin..............put a smile on my face from the git-go. Love the rhyming.
Your comedic timing and delivery is great.
Very entertaining.
Fun stuff!
-T

Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,857
Likes: 1
Top 10 Poster
Offline
Top 10 Poster
Joined: Apr 2002
Posts: 19,857
Likes: 1
Hello Gavin,


It's ha- ha clever.

Thanks for sharing what you do.


Calvin
https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandID=11440

Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 1,385
Likes: 1
D
Top 200 Poster
Offline
Top 200 Poster
D
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 1,385
Likes: 1
Gavin,

You really do have a way with words, with a fresh and always clever take to storytelling—excellent write. Like this a lot—Gavin and The Mysterious Beings at their very best. Nice production as well; vocal sits very nicely in that mix. Well done!

All my best to you,

Deej

IronKnee #1181779 10/02/22 12:37 AM
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Top 200 Poster
OP Offline
Top 200 Poster
Joined: May 2017
Posts: 2,132
Likes: 22
Originally Posted by IronKnee
Hi Gavin..............put a smile on my face from the git-go. Love the rhyming.
Your comedic timing and delivery is great.
Very entertaining.
Fun stuff!
-T
Thanks for listening, Tom. Glad you enjoyed it. smile


Link Copied to Clipboard
Support Just Plain Folks

We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.


Newest Members
yasir252, cathennashira, Samwise, HappySousa, Jasmine_Kurb
21,469 Registered Users
Forum Statistics
Forums117
Topics125,690
Posts1,160,843
Members21,469
Most Online37,523
Jan 25th, 2020
Just Plain Quotes
"I left my home, only to find a new home, full of heart, soul and dreams. Then, I left that new home, heart intact, but much stronger and energized from the experience" -Brian Austin Whitney
Today's Birthdays
Herbie Gaines (2024), hlcd (71), unionspecific (37)
Popular Topics(Views)
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5