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Zegovia
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/20/25 08:15 PM
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A Kiss
by Marilyn Oakley - 03/18/25 02:17 PM
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by Michael Thomas Ellis - 03/18/25 02:11 PM
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SMOKING THE BIRD SEEDS
I LOVE TO FEED ALL THE BIRDS IN MY YARD,
AND WATCH THEM SO CHEERFULLY FEED,
ALL MERRILY SINGING IN JOYFUL SOUND,
BECAUSE THEY ARE HAPPILY FREED.
I USED TO LIVE IN A WORLD LIKE THIERS,
TO TRAVEL WHEREVER I PLEASE,
FLOCKING WITH OTHERS AND SINGING WITH JOY
WITHOUT ANY FEAR OF DISEASE.
HUMANS NOW LIVE IN A WORLD THAT HAS CHANGED,
AND FREEDOM IS GIVEN AWAY,
HOPING TO TRADE IT FOR SAFETY SOMEHOW,
AND THINKING THAT IT'S HERE TO STAY.
FREEDOM IS NOW JUST A DREAM IN MY HEAD,
A MEMORY THAT COMES WHEN I'M STONED,
SMOKING THE BIRDSEEDS AND SINGING MY SONGS,
STRUNG OUT IN MY BIRD BATH ALONE.
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Cool lyrics Perry! John 
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...feed your head.
I liked it so much I went at it as I heard it sing and made some changes for you to KOS
I LOVE TO FEED ALL THE BIRDS IN MY YARD,
WATCH THEM SO CHEERFULLY FEED,
MERRILY SINGING their JOYFUL SOUND,
Happily flying and free.
I USED TO LIVE IN A WORLD LIKE THEiRS,
TRAVELling all as I pleased,
FLOCKING WITH OTHERS we sang loud with JOY
No fear when you're flying this free.
HUMANS NOW LIVE IN A WORLD THAT HAS CHANGED,
FREEDOM's been given AWAY,
Everyone's trading for FOR SAFETY SOMEHOW,
???????.
FREEDOM IS NOW JUST A DREAM IN MY HEAD,
A MEMORY THAT COMES WHEN I'M STONED,
SMOKING THE BIRDSEEDS AND SINGING MY SONGS,
STRUNG OUT IN MY BIRD BATH ALONE.
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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i like your changes. That last line in the third stanza was an attempt to point out that swapping freedom for safety would mean we are worthy of neither. (Benjamin Franklin)
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Thank you. A little clumsy in spots. Written on a whim after hearing some bad ideas from the top brass in the Army. They must be smoking bird seeds!
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