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Carolina
by E Swartz - 01/19/25 06:54 AM
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Ela Minus
by Gary E. Andrews - 01/18/25 10:10 PM
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Breathe
by JAPOV - 01/18/25 03:49 AM
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Another lyric by CK that I couldn't resist messing with  https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14465066Gazing at the stars, sharing dreams And a bottle of wine Maybe if you kiss me, you will see We're just two of a kind Walking by the sea, watching waves A'rollin' onna' the shore Baby if you hold me, you will see We don’t need anything more Cause' If the timing is right, maybe tonight You might like spending the night with me Yeah' if the timing is right, maybe tonight You might like spending the night with me Come'on baby, spend the night with me You might like spending the night with me A Venus with arms, breathtaking Nubile dream of a face Sweet little smiles, playful eyes A loving warm embrace And if the morning comes too soon We can shame the sun and make love till noon Cause' If the timing is right...
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Japov,
What a great Bluesy tune & well performed in all respects--loved it. This song will stay on my mind after I hear it. One thought/sug--I'd like to see the transition from vs to chorus have a slight music-build maybe with some drums involved to better launch the PC/Ch.
Nice work!
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Ha! I know you're right Eddie... A nice little horn trio and some backing vocals would do the trick I think Thanks!
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Oh I really like this, nice bluesy sensual number. 😘🎸🔥
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Yeah', CK makes it easy sometimes Thanks MO
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This moves along nicely.
I can hear a break before chorus and backing vocals and hits emphasising the “If the timing is right, maybe tonight” lines. You could use that as the title too.
Good one.
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Yeah' I can hear all that too... but my little refurbished 2012 Mac mini is all I can afford these days lol Thanks Vic! Tony
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