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#1179251 - 08/04/21 08:49 PM Leading the Pack  
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One for sync perhaps.

https://soundcloud.com/marilyn-oakley/leading-the-pack

LEADING THE PACK

I didnít see but felt the wound
that dropped me to my knees
Betrayal by a brother
It cuts too deep

Iíll track you down to ease my pain
A hunter and his prey
And I wonít stop this tracking
til Iíve taken out this ache

CHORUS
Throw me to the wolves
Iíll come back two-fold
Iíll be the silent soldier
to bring down my foe
Waiting in the shadows
Iíll take my bond back
Throw me to the wolves
Iíll return leading the pack

Treason needs a heavy sword
to drive out the enemy
Iíll cut the lie from your heart
and watch it slowly bleed

Today Iíve fallen, tomorrow Iíll rise
My blood and sweat will seep
into Godís green earth
The Lord will strengthen me

CHORUS

Bridge
As I step from the darkness
you may not recognize me
I put back my pieces differently

CHORUS

Ending Throw me to the wolves Iíll return leading the pack

© Marilyn Oakley/Carlene McDearis Wentworth

and this talented little lady did a collaboration with this one. :o))

https://youtu.be/d61S2WFgFeQ

#1179253 - 08/04/21 11:46 PM Re: Leading the Pack [Re: Marilyn Oakley]  
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Oh, she is SO cute! Way Cool! smile

I just wish the song wasn't so... dark lol.

#1179264 - 08/05/21 01:21 PM Re: Leading the Pack [Re: JAPOV]  
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Originally Posted by JAPOV
Oh, she is SO cute! Way Cool! smile

I just wish the song wasn't so... dark lol.


Thank you, Japov.
Yes, I thought she did a great job too. Yeah, sometimes ya gotta write those dark ones LOL

#1179276 - 08/05/21 06:27 PM Re: Leading the Pack [Re: Marilyn Oakley]  
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Nice feel to this one, Marilyn...the harmonies in the chorus really stand out...I'd like to hear a high note in the harmony on "differently"..I think it would add power and flow nicely into the final chorus...just a thought.

Steve


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#1179278 - 08/05/21 07:36 PM Re: Leading the Pack [Re: Marilyn Oakley]  
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I think you're right about the sync thing. Very cinematic feel to it, and yes - very dark. Like Steve, I picked up on the word "differently." It sounds a bit weak the way it's sung, especially in comparison to the rest. Good luck with the sync!

#1179282 - 08/05/21 08:50 PM Re: Leading the Pack [Re: VNORTH2]  
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Originally Posted by VNORTH2
Nice feel to this one, Marilyn...the harmonies in the chorus really stand out...I'd like to hear a high note in the harmony on "differently"..I think it would add power and flow nicely into the final chorus...just a thought.

Steve


Thank you, Steve.

#1179283 - 08/05/21 08:51 PM Re: Leading the Pack [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Originally Posted by Gavin Sinclair
I think you're right about the sync thing. Very cinematic feel to it, and yes - very dark. Like Steve, I picked up on the word "differently." It sounds a bit weak the way it's sung, especially in comparison to the rest. Good luck with the sync!



Thank you, Gavin

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