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Hi Everyone, just a little tune that I had asked my wife to sing for me. Hope you all like it. As always, any and all comments welcome, and first impressions are most welcome. “OVER THERE" By Tom Tognacihttps://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11794379 You’re not the only One so lonely As I go thru my life There was no emotion No devotion In the moments spent that night You just pretended not to care When I was over there In the idle chatter We didn’t matter You seemed a little too polite You played your guitar While I tore an old scar Singing words lovers might That strain proved too much to bare When I was over there Why don’t you love me The way I love you? Is your heart yours to keep? Is it my style Or do you just take a while To look before you leap? Those questions I couldn’t dare When I was over there
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Oh, my goodness Tom! What have you gone and done? Beautiful Recording! Lovely voice! Very NICE! You two could have easily done a back and forth "QnA" type thing though... Just Sayin'
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Oh, my goodness Tom! What have you gone and done? Beautiful Recording! Lovely voice! Very NICE! You two could have easily done a back and forth "QnA" type thing though... Just Sayin' Dam....why didn't I think of that??? Great sug! Thanks. -T
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Very nice. Your wife has a great voice.
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Very nice. Your wife has a great voice. Thanks Gavin............I pass that on ;-)
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What a great feel to the song. I didn't even notice there wasn't a chorus because the last line in the verses was so cool and stood out. Really good vocal and I love the simplicity of the instrumentation.
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What a great feel to the song. I didn't even notice there wasn't a chorus because the last line in the verses was so cool and stood out. Really good vocal and I love the simplicity of the instrumentation.
Steve Thanks Steve for the kind words...........I appreciate it!!!
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Raw beauty and sadness combined--I like It!
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Raw beauty and sadness combined--I like It!
Mackie Thanks Mackie!! Hearing from you is always appreciated.
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Yes...very nice Tom. Beautiful song well played and sung. What more to ask?
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Really, really good song. And, agreed, your wife has a lovely voice.
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What a sweet voice Tom!
Loved it, loved it. I might have your wife jump back in a measure earlier after the instrumental solo--small break after solo not needed--IMO.
A real gem Tom!
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Yes...very nice Tom. Beautiful song well played and sung. What more to ask? Thanks John! Much appreciated Really, really good song. And, agreed, your wife has a lovely voice. Thank you craig for listening and your nice comment What a sweet voice Tom!
Loved it, loved it. I might have your wife jump back in a measure earlier after the instrumental solo--small break after solo not needed--IMO.
A real gem Tom!
steady-eddie And always glad to hear from you...........thanks sooooo much!
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Very nice melody to go with your lyrics, enjoyed your performance, and your wife has a lovely voice.
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Very nice melody to go with your lyrics, enjoyed your performance, and your wife has a lovely voice. Thank you Marilyn.............I appreciate you stopping by!
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