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#1178617 - 07/16/21 12:06 PM Right Words, Right Time  
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It can be quite elusive finding both of these at the ideal moment.


RIGHT WORDS, RIGHT TIME

c2020 Brian Beecher


You may have a bounce in your step
And a song in your heart
Now youíve met the one you feel you love

Feelings of confidence abound
Youíre shouting isnít life grand
But I need to tell you now here is the rub

If you want her to be yours
This is what youíll have to do

Youíve gotta say the right words
And just at the right time
Donít tell her youíll meet up at eight
And not show up until nine

Donít go about promising more
Then you can deliver to her door
Youíve gotta say the right words
And just at the right time

You have good intentions but there are
Just so many hours in the day
Emotions could be powerful and intense

Acting controlling or possessive
May only drive her far away
Still you donít want to leave her sitting on the fence

Trying to rein someone in
May just be your biggest sin

Youíve gotta say the right words
And just at the right time
Donít tell her youíll meet up at eight
And not show up until nine

Donít go about promising more
Then you can deliver to her door
Youíve gotta say the right words
And just at the right time

Ideas and conversations they may wander
From one discussion to another
Still there may be a challenge in the air

You may find too much is happening
And you canít focus on the right things
Still you need to find a way to show you care

Have fun at a party or on a walk
But remember to listen as well as talk

Youíve gotta say the right words
And just at the right time
Donít tell her youíll meet up at eight
And not show up until nine

Donít go about promising more
Then you can deliver to her door
Youíve gotta say the right words
And just at the right time

#1179113 - 07/30/21 10:01 PM Re: Right Words, Right Time [Re: beechnut79]  
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I know my activity on here is sporadic at best and as such I haven't earned the right to offer much advice; but, i think your rhyme pattern in the chorus is a little off. The first "stanza" says right words at right time, meet up at eight show up at nine, has a good flow to it. The second "stanza" doesn't follow the same pattern. Possible change
Don't promise her the moon
If you can't even reach the sky
You've gotta say the right words
And at just the right time.

#1179316 - 08/07/21 10:56 AM Re: Right Words, Right Time [Re: beechnut79]  
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Will keep this one in mind.

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