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#1178810 - 07/21/21 11:30 AM Finding Balance  
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Something so many of us seem to have a hard time doing.


FINDING BALANCE

c2020 Brian Beecher


Having trouble finding balance
I just canít seem to break away
From this feeling thatís been knocking ta my door

Itís possible there is tension
With someone in my life today
This feeling tells me she donít want me anymore

Maybe Iíll go out in nature
And then have myself a good rest
Then return with fresh eyes and an open heart


Should I not engage with her again
Maybe it would be for the best
To give me a chance to make a brand new start

Quality time hanging out may be on the menu
Though may not be seeing all the gifts of the day
Joyful energy can also be intense now
Romanticizing a relationship thatís lost its way
A hard time finding balance since she went away

Unrealistic demands would
Lead into jealous behavior
When I just wanted to relax with friends

She would throw a wrench
Into my dreamy energy
Tell me now, is this how the story ends

A disagreement or misunderstanding
Could just be a little irritation
Expectations of how others should behave

Her dreams or ideals
May be at the crux of the matter
Tried smoothing things over but the love I couldnít save

Quality time hanging out may be on the menu
Though may not be seeing all the gifts of the day
Joyful energy can also be intense now
Romanticizing a relationship thatís lost its way
A hard time finding balance since she went away

#1179106 - 07/30/21 07:15 PM Re: Finding Balance [Re: beechnut79]  
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Hello Brian,
I like the start of this one, but think you might consider a more simple story line:




Having trouble finding balance
I just canít seem to break away
From this feeling thatís been knocking ta my door

Itís possible there is tension
With someone in my life today
This feeling tells me she donít want me anymore

Maybe Iíll go out in nature
And then have myself a good rest
Then return with fresh eyes and an open heart

So you say to her....straight out you been throwing me off balance and she says no you been throwing Me off balance

then double back. and both on balance again

You Know? like make it simple and happy ending.

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