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https://soundcloud.com/artwhimsically-yours/melancholy-bluesLife is a burglar, endlessly breaking into wombs unprotected, an almost impregnable fortress of flesh. Slipping up the alleys, while leaving their accomplices to fall, far behind. breaching the nest eggs, where treasures await, sustenance for nine months, great futures of promise. Life is a burgular..... Birth’s a pardon, clean slates for all the first gasp of breath, brings worlds full of pickings. years spent procuring, a wealth of possessions, through honest hard work, or by means truly shameful. And in between all this philosophical crap Love comes to steal your heart many times in your life bringing you your man or your wife and sweet joy beyond imagining yeahhhhh..... But even love can become a trap leaving you to face the rap of alimony and all the baloney of broken hearts and vows leaving you with the saddest of blues as you become one again chasing new love in a circle that never seems to end. Life is full of one’s One single spermatozoa breaks through membranes of a fertilized egg, one chance out of the millions, life is formed, joined by a cord to another till it is severed and they become one again. Screaming their way from womb to the world, Is it prophetic that we must start as one, and often end as one, life is full of so many ones, They sit at bars sipping black velvet to anesthetize their lives to cover their eyes in hazes of apathy, They go home alone one staggered step at a time, to dream of what once was two yet still they wake alone, as one. Be kind to every one you meet, someday you might share their fate, of knowing no one to commiserate with. No one at all to commiserate with and Death is a pawn shop, where your life is exchanged, battered and weary, and each judged to be, worthless or worthy and many will gain Heavenly riches, while others get paid back in most woeful ways These are my Melancholy Blues Something to learn from for all of your days.... Life can bring you happiness but far too often it makes you pay. Amazing Blues brilliantly Composed & played by-Sepe-©-2021 Vocals & Lyrics Sung & Written by Matthew F. Blowers III-©-2021 Art~Whimsically Yours Studio The Blues come in so many forms all starting with one,
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Hi Matt Had me thinkingof the much lamented Frank Zappa here. A good song, enjoyed the trip John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hey Travis Thanks so much for the comparision to the great Zappa. Sepe is on hell of oa great Jazz & Blues Creator. he Deserves more the Half the credit for ths song. I am so glad you enjoyed the trip. Thanks again-Matt
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Pretty cool Zapp-ish kinda blues tune.
The lyrics are the best part of this tune. I was not a fan of the lead guitar stepping on the vocals all through the song. I also think the vocals need some leveling in the mix - they really jump out to bite you sometimes (if this was intended then disregard).
Liked the song; hated the production.
Honest as Always, TC
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Hey TC thanks for your comment and critique. The song is still in process. but at least i got you on the lyrics, that's a start.
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