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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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https://soundcloud.com/artwhimsically-yours/sultry-eyes-hearthisatSultry eyes... Baby blues Melting my heart and my soul Each time I look at you Petulant lips Begging to be kissed And I can't think of anything More wonderful That we could do You make it so damn easy It's not complicated Just one kiss would free me You don't know how long I've waited... For your sultry eyes Your baby blues Scorching so hotly And torching my thoughts Each time you gaze at me Eager lips, in such a pretty pink As you stretch up to offer me a taste of your kiss and set me to trembling... You make it all so easy There's nothing complicated As your first kiss frees me You don't know how long I've waited... Bridge- As the dance floor fades Beneath my feet Lost in the warm, wet haze Of your kiss so sweet That seems to go on and on For an eternity..... Until I open my eyes To find love waiting for me... From all the times I've waited... For your sultry eyes your Baby... Blues... Music, Vocals & Lyrics Composed Sung and Written By Matthew F. Blowers III ©-2021 At: Art~Whimsically Yours Studio The eyes tell all. and give so much in privacy,
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I think there's a really good song hiding here. The problem for me is that the accompaniment seems strangely detached from the melody, which makes it hard to know.
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Thanks for your critique. I will see if I can locate a muscial surgeon to reattach the melody to the accompaniment. The fauly might lie in the Echocardiagragm?? I appreciate your concer,. Stay well and best of luck to you i your music.~Matt
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