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#1175645 - 04/05/21 01:31 AM "It's Just No Good Without Your Love."  
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Food tastes Blah,
and my wine tastes cheap,
Iím up all night
cause I just canít sleep,
television is boring me
and my depression
it is flooring me
I donít go no where
I just sit and stare
my friends call me
but I donít care

trumpís an idiot
but heís my least concern
How he gets his fat foot
in his mouth
we all may never learn.
but I got deeper troubles
then the soon to be
Ex- Resident
of that White House
where he never was
fit to be a president

I got things to vent
Iím full of discontent
I had a love
I thought was dope
but now I donít
know where it went
I got money in picket
that I havenít spent
Iím not broken yet baby
But man Iím bent
and Iíve tried to repent
with good intent
but your face is all
Hard as cement.

Itís not good without your love
Itís not even fair to middling
and the only exercise I get
Is sitting with my thumbís twiddling
just because we have been quibbling
I wish we could be rekindling
cause my hopes are slowly dwindling
slowly dwindling

I donít comb my hair
there ain't no one to see
the tangles knotted there
Like a birdís nest plopped on me

I donít even get dressed
I just sit in my briefs
cause you wonít take me back
and I canít get relief

I'm a man whose
drowning in his grief
beyond belief
youíre the only girl I want
But now you donít want me.

Can you please forgive me
for my callous words
I understand your anger
but itís so damn long, it hurts
I promise to make it up to you
I treat you like a queen
Iíll satisfy your every need
cause I miss our love routine
I miss our loving routine

Itís just no good without you
itís a nightmare all day long
And at night IĎm so damn lonely
let me fix what I did wrong
I miss that pretty smile you share
Iím getting wrinkles
from the frown I bear
Oh, Baby come on back,
and show me that you really care
cause itís just no good
most everywhere
without your sweet love
baby that I can share.

Cause itís not good without your love
Itís not even fair to middling
and the only exercise I get
Is sitting with my thumbís a twiddling
cause we've been a quibbling
I wish we could be rekindling
cause my hopes are slowly dwindling
slowly dwindling

Food taste blah
my wine tastes cheap
Iím up all night
cause I canít sleep
I love ya babe
Iím in too deep
But Iíve got promises Iíll keep
if you will just come back to me.
yeah, if you will just come back to me
I got promises i'll keep

And maybe I can get
some sleep
with you
Maybe I Can
get some sleep
with you
Back when our
love is true

Stellar music Composed & played
by Colonel Denton-©-2020
Vocals & Lyrics Sung & written by-
Matthew F. Blowers III-©-2020
Image by m storm from Pixabay

One's whole body suffers when love is absent.

#1175663 - 04/07/21 11:40 AM Re: "It's Just No Good Without Your Love." [Re: MFB III]  
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I like this. It's like rap you can actually hear and the lyric holds your attention, although that changes a bit towards the end because it seems bit too long for this kind of song. I would ditch the verse about Trump, if I were you. I don't think it adds anything and seems unnecessary and out of place (a bit like him, I suppose LOL). Also, it sounds a little like you are maybe moving closer and further away from the mic in places.

I enjoyed this.

#1175681 - 04/08/21 08:43 PM Re: "It's Just No Good Without Your Love." [Re: MFB III]  
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Hey Gavin, Thanks so very much for your stellar critique. I appreciate your stopping by.
I have to dance less when I am singing because it effects the vocals...LOL. I will consider removing trump form this song. after all why should I give him any glory or promos. Colonel Denton and I enjoy doing understandable rap with a story. Thanks again.

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