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by Fdemetrio - 04/23/24 12:11 AM
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https://soundcloud.com/carroll-kiphen/shadow-in-me-mixdown-1chris-wood-music-and-vocalsThe shadow in me Intro Into the darkness Into the void. Swallowed in silence Smothered in noise. Verse Sheltered by shadows I cower in fear. Can’t move a muscle. A strangers in here. Pre Chorus What will he do? What will I say? What will he ask? Of me today? Chorus My dark hearted master. The shadow in me. My dark hearted master. The shadow in me. Verse I can’t see his face But I hear him breathe. What scares me the most Is he’s part of me. Pre Chorus What will he do? What will I say? What will he ask? Of me today? Chorus My dark hearted master. The shadow in me. My dark hearted master. The shadow in me. Verse Shattered by violence. I darkened my mind Undressed my conscience And set up a shrine. Bridge An altar of worship Where I come to pray. An altar to evil My blood on the blade. Pre Chorus What will he do? What will I say? What will he ask? Of me today? Chorus My dark hearted master. The shadow in me. My dark hearted master. The shadow in me
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The voice is stunningly good and the vibe is way up there. The writing is so so good. What a great example of how to arrange a song. Sometimes it's hard to make out what he is singing, but don't change it because it feels as if it should be that way. Top song I've heard for some time. Steve
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Appreciate the kind words. I'm just lucky that talented people like Chris and Deej , Rob B. and Ian choose to use my lyrics. I'm nothing without their talents.
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