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I had this over in the lyric board, thought i`d bring it over and post it here for a bit..thanks if you listen and comment...Lane https://soundcloud.com/user-745253707/rules-of-the-game-piano-voice-demo/s-a1qxXW9cDrXrules of the game v1 was it something I said days that go by a special time... I should have been there. v2 was It all up to me did I turn away let you think... I didn`t care. chorus we live and we love It`s true what they say the best or the worst can come any day. the rules of the game.... if your going to play... [small music bridge] v3 If I leave the room when you mention his name is that something thats bothering you. v4 I hate to pick sides but baby I`m picking mine its hard to let someone go.... chorus we live and we love It`s true what they say the best or the worst can come any day. the rules of the game.... if your going to play... bridge You just have to choose at a hell of a cost and that look in your eyes says its someone... you lost... chorus we live and we love It`s true what they say the best or the worst can come any day. the rules of the game.. the rules of the game.. if your going to play... 1/1/21 © Copyright 2021 Vincent. All Rights Reserved.
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction,
one might save you from the other...Vincent
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Sweet!  Don't change a thing! Tony
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It's wonderful. I might bring the piano up a tiny bit relative to the voice, but only a really tiny amount.
I'm a bit confused about what is being said. I thought I knew, but then the last line of the bridge comes along and leaves me scratching my head.
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Nice song for sure. Good job!
The vocal has some distortion. Not terrible and it might just be your setup that limits you. Just wonder if your singing a little to close to the mic?
My biggest issue is I REALLY want this keys turned up. They sound beautiful to me and are just a important as the vocal imo.
Nice work!
Ricky
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thanks Ricky for commenting and taking time to listen, thats my friend singing this, I have files with vocals
and files with just music. I always tell my friends if you see anything you`d like to sing?..just ask I have both. thanks again for stopping. Lane
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thanks Tony, it was a real quick write, I thought it might be to slow. But it does not bore people.
hope all is good in your world....Lane
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Hey Gavin, I have not messed with it at all, but I do have both music and vocals, so I can do that pretty easy..
thanks so much for taking time to give this a listen, and the suggestions, it all helps tuning these songs up...thanks again Gavin. any ideas you have toss them over.
its kind of like Gavin, who is giving up who, is what I had
in mind. and if its you, its a cost, I see a love was before me.
and she wants to go back...
Last edited by lane1777; 01/29/21 05:17 AM.
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