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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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I have been waiting with much anticipation to post this song. After we first tracked the song a couple of weeks ago my friend and co-writer Jeff Goffman and I decided that we could do better, so it was back to the writing room. This is the result. This song was written for one very simple reason - we miss America. Hoping to pitch to Trace Adkins, the Oaks, Craig Morgan, Diamond Rio, and a few others. Thanks for listening. https://songwritingpro.com/track_detail/3612
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Well written and well done.
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Whoever your demo singer is is spot on! Love the lyric, love the song! I didn't see the lyrics posted, but I heard them loud and clear. It's almost like I'm listening to a fallen solider..............which may be the little piece missing to make this a more heartfelt personal song. Like Driving with Private Malone .............I was also thinking the title might be Miss America.... like a double meaning (?).
I guess I'm looking for a true (even if made up story) of a veteran....... who is talking about America as if she was a woman you spent your life defending... and you gave your life for her................does that make sense?
Let me add something.... when you say I miss America you're making the doom and gloom that America is already gone... and nobody wants to sing along with that. We want to sing along with............ this is MY America... and she will never go down without a fight sort of lyric.................. (yes?no?)
Did you mean that you miss being in the country of America or the promise of America... I'm so confused. hahha
Last edited by Kay-lynn Carew; 01/22/21 12:24 AM.
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