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"A Double Whiskey Night"
The beauty across the bar sends this Cuervo Gold Phone number in lipstick, red, & bold I wave the drink away push her number to the side No tequila or beer today
A Double Whiskey Night Chased with tears I cry Drowning thoughts of love that's died A Double Whiskey Night A toast to love that's blind Remembering' when her heart was mine A Double Whiskey Night
Kaylee's with a new guy throwing' darts & shooting' pool Slow dancing, swaying to the groove So damn easy for her to leave this boy behind Trading Tennessee whiskey for California wine
A Double Whiskey Night Chased with tears I cry Drowning thoughts of love that's died A Double Whiskey Night A toast to love that's blind Remembering' when her heart was mine A Double Whiskey Night
I feel a hand in mine lead me down to the dance room floor Kaylee's eyes meet mine while dancing with her guy The beauty asks can I buy you another pour?
A Double Whiskey Night Chased with tears I cry Drowning thoughts of love that's died A Double Whiskey Night A toast to love that's blind Remembering' when her heart was mine
A Double Whiskey Night Chased with tears I cry Drowning thoughts of love that's died A Double Whiskey Night A toast to love that's blind Remembering' when her heart was mine A Double Whiskey Night A Double Whiskey Night A Double Whiskey Night
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Some things that jumped out: Pronouncing the word Cuervo might interrupt the flow of your phrasing. Loved the number on the glass but who gives a number without talking? What'll it be... Line is awkward. Unless you find a unique angle, this subject has been done once or twice. Best of luck Mike
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Pronouncing the word Cuervo might interrupt the flow of your phrasing. Loved the number on the glass but who gives a number without talking? What'll it be... Line is awkward. Unless you find a unique angle, this subject has been done once or twice. Mike Thanks for the LYRIC look, I decided to post a Workstape with music on the MP3...
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