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Hi guys, this song is a song that I've been working on for some years now and now I've done the demo I am asking for some feedback. https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/it-hurtsIT HURTS Written & Produced by Irwin Abrigo Vocals & All Vocals arrangement by Heather Rachael ©2020 Irwin Abrigo (Member Of BMI) (VERSE 1) I plan, to live , my whole life through With me, and you, yes this is true I remember you saying You’d wanted the same thing too we met, I had wanted Your love to be devoted Snow is falling, I’m at home It is cold, I’m alone Against my window there’s a storm And it’s coming on strong (CHORUS) Outside, I can hear Hear the sound of the wind, blowing Wishing, Lying in my bed, I’m pretending Pretending you were near Just to think you’re not here it hurts Just to think you’re not here it hurts Just to think you’re not here it... hurts (VERSE 2) Never had, I ask, you for too much So how can you make me feel sad? I only ask for your touch You know that you’re all that I had I need your, hugs and kisses I need you more than riches I dim the lights, through the night And this is, wishful thinking Like the wind that blows through my door I hope you’ll come walking (CHORUS) Outside, I can hear Hear the sound of the wind, blowing Wishing, Lying in my bed, I’m pretending Pretending you were near Just to think you’re not here it hurts Just to think you’re not here it hurts Just to think you’re not here it, hurts (BRIDGE) Just to think, that you’d leave Is what I can’t believe You left me with a broken heart Pretending you were here (Out) Just to think you’re not here it hurts Just to think you’re not here it hurts Just to think you’re not here it... hurts
Last edited by Irwin; 01/11/20 02:15 PM.
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Very good!
Well written and well done.
Have fun!
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Very good!
Well written and well done.
Have fun!
Thank you Guy, nice to hear this from you. I do appreciate. have a nice day. Irwin
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